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A good fanfic is one that you can read and enjoy even though you haven't even read the original story.

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  • DARTH_MOUSE
    DARTH_MOUSE6mth
    Replied to MohammedKH

    I looked up the first pair of noise cancelling headphones and google told me that Bose made them in 1989. This was a quick google search by the way and not any extensive research. So, I could be wrong.

    "Good, now get in," I chuckled, giving her a pair of noise cancelling headphones as she scurried inside the small cage. While I connected my ropes to it in knots so that I could carry the cage as a backpack. Once I was done, I looked at her in the cage, and reminded her not to make a sound. "Let's go…"
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    MARVEL: GAMER PATH
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  • DARTH_MOUSE
    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Commented

    I wonder if this is talking about the woman at the Kengan match or Misaki?

    "Well, I'll cook dinner, is there something that you want to eat?" Shishio asked, but he didn't know that a dangerous woman had targeted him.
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    I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Replied to Lord_Rudan

    Getting that juice

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    The Epic of Leviathan [COMPLETE]
    Anime & Comics · InGlorious
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  • DARTH_MOUSE
    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Commented

    My first Harry Potter Fanfic and I am liking it a lot. Keep up the good work dude :)

    Ch 33 Chapter 32
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    HP: I Have "Pure" Magic
    Book&Literature · Snollygoster
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  • DARTH_MOUSE
    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Commented

    Enhanced grip huh. hmmmmmmmmmm

    <Congratulations, you have received an "Enhanced Grip">
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    I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • DARTH_MOUSE
    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Commented

    I'm liking the story a lot and hope that more chapters come in the future. Keep up the good work :)

    Ch 6 Depression Overcome (Short Chapter)
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    Naruto: The Otsutsuki Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · DaoistShinobi
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  • DARTH_MOUSE
    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 28 Chapter 27
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    My life as Sasuke
    Anime & Comics · Nahin_Monkar
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  • DARTH_MOUSE
    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Commented

    is this going to still keep to one chapter a month. It's such a shame if that's the case.

    Ch 54 Title Chaputer
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    Overlord: The Origin
    Anime & Comics · Evrabonzz
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  • DARTH_MOUSE
    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Commented

    I'm really liking this fan-fic. Can't wait for more to come out.

    Ch 5 An Awkward Morning, True Friends? Eren's Success?
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    The Predator of Paradise
    Anime & Comics · DaoistShinobi
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  • DARTH_MOUSE
    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter. I enjoyed it :)

    Ch 3 Run Potato Girl Run
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    The Predator of Paradise
    Anime & Comics · DaoistShinobi
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  • DARTH_MOUSE
    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Replied to drj5025

    This is so true. Imagine someone breaks into your house and you call the cops, but by the time they made it there you were already either kidnapped or murdered or beat up. All depends on your imagination. Any of those incidences can happen and it will be too late.

    Well. let's just say that I don't think it's a good idea to make people rely on heroes to this extent...
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    Ant King In MHA
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  • DARTH_MOUSE
    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Commented

    I recommend that you introduce the character in a different way. This just isn't that nice to read.

    "Aunt Zoe, I'm ready to go." I, a 13 year old 5 foot 9 inch boy, with pitch black shoulder length hair, an average looking but masculine face, and a broad and powerful build declares.
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    The Predator of Paradise
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    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Commented
    Ch 55 No One Left Behind
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    Pantheon Online
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    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Commented

    Why is there a sad smile on Clay?

    Ch 54 Not A Typical Game
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    Pantheon Online
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  • DARTH_MOUSE
    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Commented

    A ticking time bomb

    "Yes." Shiina nodded and didn't think too much, but in truth, she was curious about Nana's relationship with Shishio. She was wondering whether this girl was the one that had sex with Shishio before, but she didn't know how to ask this question.
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    I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • DARTH_MOUSE
    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Commented

    Congrats on going premium dude. I will definitely try to read more with my saved up fast passes :)

    Ch 53 Too Far
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    Pantheon Online
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  • DARTH_MOUSE
    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Replied to Daoist_Gdshai

    I've heard that if its hard to concentrate than having something to fiddle with in your hands while concentrating helps a bit. For example if you have a ball to move around in your hand while doing some homework helps me a lot. Basically a fidget toy that helps you concentrate.

    Anyway I started to concentrate on sensing a pushing force as I slowly kept moving my fingers away from each other, I always found it easy to concentrate especially with a goal in mind, and then I started feeling it, a push, a very small push that it's almost unnoticeable, I kept persisting and following that feeling until I felt it, like a cloak that's covering me, it probably took me a little more than an hour to do that, so I'm quite talented, I'm probably at the level of gon and killua or maybe a little bit more.
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    HxH: Researcher
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  • DARTH_MOUSE
    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Commented

    This gives me major Austin Powers vibes but I could be wrong.

    "What can I say baby, I've always been bad." I looked over my shoulder at her and wiggled my eyebrows at her.
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    A Blazing Fist (Gamer Insert - Starting in Avatar The Last Airbender)
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  • DARTH_MOUSE
    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Commented

    I like the twist coming out of no where. Gave me a good laugh. I think shagrat will be a good choice lol

    "And now, I present to you! Your new king!", she yelled as Kace stepped forward. "Goblin King, His Majesty! Shagrat!"
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    My (Monster?) Hero Life
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  • DARTH_MOUSE
    DARTH_MOUSE1yr
    Commented

    I like it :)

    Ch 1 Levi? Where Am I? Who Are you?
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    The Predator of Paradise
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