Cid_Is_Tired

(Read to 1300) Completely agree with your point about the “logic” in the story. Just because some story element or character trait is logical doesn’t make it entertaining and enjoyable to read through. Really wish Awespec used some of that time and effort put into the ‘logical’ chapter long expositions for something else.

It’s not like he wants Karoo there because he’s going to kidnap Vivi and doesn’t want to have to worry about grabbing them as well right?

I’m sure a future version of this copy would be very entertaining

“…in a way that wouldn’t shock him too much,”-> immediately disintigrates his balls

“Hideous”

someone report this man to loki familia hr, hes saying this to the entire expedition during what is essentially a company barbecue

While I understand the intended sentiment, Steve’s speech ultimately culminates into a very long winded way of dismissing any and all effort a woman can put into her appearance or physique by saying it’s “all natural,” Furthermore , it propagates the belief that “men work harder than women” whenever he states that men have to work for any and all improvements in their physical health. The speech is inherently contradictory as it outwardly preaches of female courage yet fundamentally relies on the concept of biological privilege. Not to mention he assumes that all women desire to or are willing to undergo the trials of pregnancy, which is simply incorrect. Then again bros drunk so I’ll give him a pass as long as he converts to the cult of femboy thighs.