Joseon_Walking

Thank you for the such kind words. I hope you enjoy.

When you are publishing the chapters you can go to "stores" in Inkstone and edit the chapter. Just edit the title is all.

Thank you. I would say Weak to Strong is misnomer. I don't intend on giving MC a significant advantage over other methods of gaining strength, but he will find his own way to be strong. I hope people enjoy his growth and the surprise i have in store.

Your writing quality is great. Just seems a bit choppy in terms of flow from one chapter to another is all. Seem abrupt is all :) thank you for your lovely comment on my own story. Good luck.

The story is really solid I was instantly hooked and will add it to my collections so that I can binge read on occasion when I am caught up with all my other novels. I highly recommend you put more spaces between your paragraphs the way webnovel do it makes it hard to read comfortably when all the paragraphs are meshed together so closely.

I really enjoyed your style and writing it is straight forward. My main criticism is that some sensory stuff seems to be lacking in certain areas. Just occasionally note how something smells/feels/etc even if not necessary to the story or plot.

I got to chapter 3 (which is like update 10) you really should remove chapter numbers for letters and other things not directly tied to present storyline and label them differently it will greatly help keeping track. The Writing is top notch their isn't much to complain about and I like the style. I'm still getting a overall feel for the story, but by n large I can't complain much it is really good.

The writing is solid I saw few if any grammar errors the story flows well, but I would like a bit more sensory detail here and there (not much just a few spots I noticed seemed...empty? My biggest pet peeve is no spaces between paragraphs makes it really hard to read on webnovel, but that is a formatting issue not writing issue.

Really solid writing, but just a suggestion put a space between all your paragraphs it is really hard on the eyes to see them so close together it bleeds into one another and I get lost sometimes.

Everything is great and I really enjoyed it, but I think the script style for dialogue makes it a bit messy to read. I would rather FEEL the emotion coming from the characters as they are speaking and what they are emoting. Keep it up. You are doing well. I will add this to my collections.