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ESH

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A guy that likes to write stories and tell tales.

2020-11-15 JoinedBrazil
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  • ESH
    ESH2yr
    Replied to theyasuke_

    Thanks. I hope you enjoyed reading a little bit. If you stopped by any mean, can you say the exactly chapter, please?

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  • ESH
    ESH2yr
    Replied to jmuench001

    Good guess but f**cking no.

    [TFA: That's too easy.]
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  • ESH
    ESH2yr
    Posted

    No greater changes were made yet so I suggest you to read the First Chapter till the end or just the end of it. Thank you for the trust and see you soon.

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  • ESH
    ESH2yr
    Replied to LeWil

    Big Ben. The sound of both pronunciations is similar to me and I didn't look for reference before doing this mistake. Thanks.

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  • ESH
    ESH2yr
    Replied to cluiz

    I get it but it isn't the main focus here. Forgive my bad writing as well. I hope you have a good time reading.

    [Reward: 1 free stat]
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  • ESH
    ESH2yr
    Replied to Alibi_Lullaby

    Run for your life! I'll wait for good news about your health! Take care.

    Ch 6 Building the terrain
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  • ESH
    ESH2yr
    Replied to leavesfalling

    Thank you for the comprehension. Hope that you enjoy the reading even with this kind of problems. I'll work hard to improve and avoid this kind of situation again.

    Ch 2 South District
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  • ESH
    ESH2yr
    Replied to Fiaran

    I'm sorry for your trouble. If you wish I can warn you when I finish the rewriting so you can enjoy it more properly. Thank you for your concerning. Have a great day.

    Ch 3 Welcome Party
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  • ESH
    ESH2yr
    Posted

    This is a self reflexion about the whole. Taking all the scores into consideration for newcomers. The writing is very bad and I'm trying my best to improve it slowly. I'll do a rewriting after finishing the first volume. The Stability is a mess and this is totally on me. There's ups and downs I'm a human after all. So I'll try to keep it going. I really enjoy writing this story. Story development is something that I only saw how rushed is now that I'm writing this review. I'll try to improve. Character design is severely lacking. I'll start working on it and enhance it when editing. The world didn't even had its full shown on the novel yet till the 90th chapter but I'm giving some exclusive chapters to other character to increase the immersion. I think this is about it for now. On the whole I really like that so many people ignore my bad proficiency in English to just enjoy the content. FOR YOU ALL MY THANKS AND SEE YOU SOON.

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  • ESH
    ESH2yr
    Replied to Life_Sucks_0457

    What you said is mostly correct but when there's such variety of mutations only a few would experience that. As you need the magic and mutation to be compatible to enhance each other.

    Ch 4 First Class
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  • ESH
    ESH2yr
    Replied to FailingAdult

    Actually, it needs a full round of editing. Thanks for your concern. I'll be working on this shortly.

    Ch 5 Glass House
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  • ESH
    ESH2yr
    Replied to NikTitanik866

    Thanks for the guidance. I'll see what I can do about it when rewriting.

    Ch 1 Outsider
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  • ESH
    ESH2yr
    Replied to NCW2

    The early chapters are a little off I assume this was because I was creating the world while writing them. But any questions you can leave on the comments. I'll do my best to answer.

    Ch 3 Welcome Party
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  • ESH
    ESH2yr
    Replied to NCW2

    Thanks. I know that the edit is lacking but I'm doing my best to improve on the new releases. Hope that you keep reading it.

    Ch 2 South District
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  • ESH
    ESH2yr
    Replied to NikTitanik866

    Thanks for the review. I'll work on the problems eventually by giving a full novel edit. I hope you can give another chance when the time comes. If you don't mind I'd like to know till which chapter you read so I can have a better knowledge of the matter.

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  • ESH
    ESH2yr
    Replied to EmptiBlank

    About a chicken egg's size. Most wizards walk with their familiars but like a normal pet you can leave them in your dorm or at your house. As well when they gain experience, the familiars can transform as Penelope on the first chapter too.

    The next day began finally. Peter put his uniform on. Took his egg and gently put down on his pocket. Ophichus was most of the time entangled on his right hand even sleeping.
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  • ESH
    ESH2yr
    Replied to EmptiBlank

    I saw the problem, thank you. It will be fixed asap. The limit and the why is mentioned on more recent chapters but is around five. Thanks for reading and enjoy.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: My familiar
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