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Error_404_2yrPostedStill reading through the story but this is my reciew as of Chapter 50: It’s a decent story but lacks some realism and details that would parallel reality in a way that would make the story more relatable. Some phrases used don’t match what they are defined as and at times a clear disregard for common sense even if it is a fantasy; such as letting small children swim in a “river” that is over 100 meters deep unsupervised and even lies outside of their village gates, right after they were just attacked by hundreds of monsters.
- Error_404_2yrReplied to Matthew_Smith_8135
This actually does make sense because Deirus’s schemes were evolving even mimicking Jirni’s yet even though she had shown that she was leagues above him in manipulation in earlier chapters, she was stagnating now. The author had led us to believe it was because she was being outplayed but it was all according to her keikaku
Ch 1486 A Monster’s Plan (Part 2) - Error_404_3yrCommented
The evolution isnt small taratect it should be small of a different spider species
The problem is that I have 2 kinds of evolution.Lesser Taratect and Small Taratect.It doesn't seem to differ much just by hearing the names.The only difference is Lesser or Small.Ah, it would be nice if I can use my "Appraisal" on the voice of heaven.Then, I can understand the difference clearly. - Error_404_3yrCommented
Wasn’t his name Fred?
And standing by Xander and Amy's side was Frank and Snow. They too were looking around. Frank and Snow had sat next to Vorden during their time at school and although they didn't talk much. They grew a respect for him, especially after showing Xander his place. - Error_404_3yrReplied to A_ReaderX
Vorden actually seemed to like Erin, Sil on the other hand...
As she asked the question, flashing memories appeared in his head, of all the strange advancement she had made towards him and all the compliments as well. Maybe Raten enjoyed them, but Vorden certainly did not. - Error_404_3yrCommented
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