thanks a lot for your response ... really looking forward to seeing you here

Amazing work... really fantastic ... getting death note vibes.... really hope you keep writing it. You will get there... the readers will eventually come. you need to work on the format a little.... everything else is just amazing... I hope you will really use this story that you have created.... and end it well... do not needlessly prolong it and make the right choice...

The start is great. The only problem is that you are not updating enough. You must atleast upload a chapter a week. I hope to see more Chapters in the coming weeks.