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Is this a reference to the group Big Mama?
You did not just called Pokemons ugly!!!
Seriously I don't know if I like it or not, that you are using AI
If you are just writing for a short while, maybe movies would be like a good start, not like the series like movies, like Ready Player One (idk if this is like the name, I forgot). But yeah, but if you plan to write a longer one, you can probably be stuck to the anime there.
Overall, the concept of this novel/fanfic is pretty good. Its refreshing to see new and like a unique take to MHA. But, there's one thing that you kinda overlooked. So songs are usually taken from the feelings of the writers, their experiences in life, and what have they gone through in life whether from their own experience or grom observing wjha they see on their surroundings. Taking note of that, I can't seem to imaging the adults of this novel to just say its so cool that you've written a very good song. Don't you think they would've gind it weird that a kid is talking about love and whatnot in his songs? So while I love it, its's hard, for me at least, as I was always told that songs or poems are taken written with your heart and experience, I was always told that these are the expression of what you are. So again, the concept is good, but the execution of the character being able to write songs about being in love and all is quite hard to read. It would make it more realistic somewhat if you made the MC more mature before publishing songs.That's all, let me think about my review. Anyways this us just an opinion of mine. Thanks
This is what midjourney gave me, no matter how much I try, it doesn't give me a full body photo.
No Harem
So far this book has been great, keep up the good work. Although I just want to say that, I distinctly remember Skye construct was wood not crystal if I'm not wrong this is because Skye was a woodmaker or something. I don't know if I'm just tripping but this is what I remembered correct me if I'm wrong.