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but it's also, if you think about it, maybe a reference to himself in the future, though planet aquamarine becomes his first base not 8th
this was explained when they met, he's not a puppet master anymore so the quest doesn't apply
probably void is storing the bunny leader, while void is chilling in Grey's storage ring
its not that he knows all poisons, but that he's just immune to poison due to eating lots of those poisonous plants. anyways somewhere down the line maybe he will encounter a toxin that can overcome it. idk
this book is just perfection for anyone looking for a more necromancer/undead spin to the whole Sword Art Online type novels, and good God man I really want a sequel of this, maybe like what God hood is like and like the person who created that rogue AI just secretly puts a new one in but with the herald as the backer or something. honestly though, this book was amazing and right up my alley, you did amazing work with this book, though there were some grammar/spelling mistakes, it wasnt nearly as bad as some of the other books I've read on here. keep up the great writing man
can't believe It took me less than 4 days to catch up from chapter one. gotta say, I'm loving this story you've created here. already want so much more, but go at your own pace, would rather wait for your best, than push you to make rushed content or stuff you don't feel good about
he said 2 mile in the paragraph above, so probably just a typo.
eventual uprising of this collector? who should have a name given by a companion at some point, just to differentiate him from others. think it might be interesting to see him revolt against the great purpose after seeing flaws and trying to better them
is it meant to say whirlwind? or does it literally mean worldwind
I went back and re read it the other day, so worth it lol
happenstance found, that's the first book in the trilogy, books of umber I think
expanding on that, two demons found him abandoned in the world of mortals and suppressed his demon heritage cause he was unstable, they didn't know he was a demon at first thinking he was human
Imo i think it might have been better to put the approximately right before the "a few minutes"
he's not giving himself away, I'm sure he grabbed everything he could lol, since they didn't even find the bodies of the guards so he had enough time to suck up a lot
when he first went to the nurses office? also kinda like that Layla chick at reception for the hunting planets lol