shabnam_jeddikar
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Hello dear friend, my name is Shabnam and I am the author of the book Broken Demon. At first, I wanted to thank you for the excellent point you made, I trusted my editing program, and well ... it turned out that it doesn't work that well! I agree that my grammar needs to be improved and I think it's not a surprise because English isn't my first language and this book is my first experience in writing an English book. I am working on improving the grammar and errors of my book and I hope to be able to perfect it soon! Based on your effective review I edited all the parts of my book again, and I feel that it has improved a bit. And it would be nice to have an observer reader like you with us, stay with the journey, I'm sure it will surprise you!
First of all! I've read ton's of supernatural books and I can recognize a good book of this genre and this is one of them! I loved it's synopsis because it's really exciting ! This is not a cliché story for sure and it's character introduction is also Great! I highly recommend this! Great job Author!
First of all! I've read ton's of supernatural books and I can recognize a good book of this genre and this is one of them! I loved it's synopsis because it's really exciting ! This is not a cliché story for sure and it's character introduction is also Great! I highly recommend this! Great job Author!