DaoistGrandVillian

Author uploaded 200 chapters in 1 year. 80 in past 3 months but let me reming you 120 chaps left were all in privilege for 8 whole months. I started this novel just when it was released with just 20 chps uploaded. I also must say author needs to chill with the lack of milfs and abundances of [insert familial relation] cons and the lack of use of system interface. Gonna buy privilege later this new year.

First 200 chapters and the not so boring enigma dungeon 160+. Author edited enigma dungeon well but still it makes not a lot of sense

I think you have not read the backstory of the main character. Gladys loves leon. Leon became the villanious edward while gladys became kleah teraquin[elven girl] Read the novel again.

4/5 considering Longevity simulation RI and LOTM to be 4.9/5. 1 whole star lost for updates slower than the bureacracy. Author needs to stop cooking Sandwiches and Pizza before completing the Burger. What I mean is he is starting 2 novels already before this is over. I hope he increase output of chapters. 1 chapter evey 3 days aint enough. I refrain from snarky comments but the foreshadowing is deep asf and we only get tiny tidbits of amael/samael/edward/nyrel/leon and any other new name the protagonist gets because i was confused for a whole freaking year of my whole life on why leon appeared in the novel. There are so many plotholes its worse than roads in south asia. I reached out to the author today on discord and hope he renames his other novel to avoid stupid confusions. Now we come to the GOOD part. Amazing worldbuilding 5/5 leaving the plotholes that reduce my brain. We got sancta vedelia. Edenis raphiel. Celesta. Elyen kiora. I argue they made some characters way too op. No one needs Alvara, Cyril Kendel to be so op when they will be swept of the floor by Amael after he does stupid shit. I also argue the extreme harem tendency with every other girl. I think yoru thoughts with annabelle seem concerning but I as a reader will just ignore it until it affects you. I hope Edward controls himself and does not become jayden with all these goddesses. He already has 4. Writing Quality is definitely helped with chatgpt thus a 5/5 inevitably AI plays a huge role here but the story seems unique nonetheless. Story develops at a slow pace but picks up at the right time also with help of external influences which even I was surprised with. Also I hope you dont intend to add aerenwhyin= Aren and connors fiancee which is just reeking with plotlessness. Edward in the first game was a useless bore and a shitty wingman. One I laughed at. This streak of hopelessness continued in the second game with edward making another pivotal girl fall for him. Edward being dense makes 0 sense as he has played the game times and times again so he must know when what happense? All in All we must kidnap the author. I like him for his acknowledgement of RI but he does not need to go on a never ending hiatus unlike his inspiration[read auxillary chap 2]

4.2 from me, actually only 4.0 but I can't give 0 stars for bad stability of updates. read until the epilogue I think chp 343, the author needs to up his game for writing new chapters or at least not priviliging 90 days worth of chapters essentially his discord is full of spoilers. Please stop adding a character every other second and then killing them, there are more soooo many, I don't remember anyone from the first game lmao, except the mains who you either killed or got on the back burner. PLEASE make the main character not have more than 4 names, I can't. Please make Celesta what we want her to be not an Aurora once again [I am on epilogue idk what will happen and I am keeping my fingers crossed] Now we get to the good part, amazing climax i mean the main character is way too everything not focused on one thing, we forget he has a system and idk wtf is Vysindra Core 69 is, please explain his skills while you write we are just readers. other than that Edward, idea, nyrel, gaysckslover is an op person, he still wingmans but does it a lot less and we need him to come back to Falkarona and please tie up the loose ends, like what happened to his step bro and old father and why behemoth acts like a small child or why he called celeste flatter than a page and now she got more Djibouti than south africas horn??? Overall 5/5 on everything other than the stability of updates, the stupid number of characters, and the author should change how he writes toooo much stupid lore not explained like Leon and him ignoring how a character gains booty like he got mixed in with the character.

he didnt.

Nice novel. I have bought chapters until 70 but you know the urge to read it all.... I will still keep buying as many chps as i can to support you but i have taken up to the dark side. REVIEW: This is basically FY if he was 100x times stronger in 1000x times weaker world. Chiron is a person with top IQ, the first arc ending is comparable to the 88 buildings arc in RI ifykyk Chiron is an unwavering spirit, he is emotionless and takes advantage of his enemies in sometimes ways that even i threw up [like what his servant did to his uncle for his sin ew] Unfortunately I have only read till the arc where he became a king not more than that. will update once i catch up on the dark side and buy 200 chps. sorry author but webnovel sacks/ 4.8 from me 1 for just the stability of updates./ AUTHOR IS COOKING

th eguy is not wrong i read till chp 80 a year ago and when you uploaded more chapters 7 months ago i noticed this. i read masterpieces like RI and LOTM and this sticked out bro. I am now on chp 110 and i cant deny

you should read the latest chapters whwere kleah is explained. aurora was married of to celeste allie kingdom ages agoi n chp 200, kleah is a special character tho and you need to read chp 300 too understand kleah.

this is my 5th review of this novel. NO SPOILERS IN THIS REVIEW. I am on chap 300 and this is a really good novel. Forget the first 100 chapters, those are just wingmanship so that the MC can do something outside celesta kingdom. the wingmanship is forced as jaden is important so the mc an live in the future. Edward later moves on to the second game as jayden did his job of 1st game hence saving the world part which was important. Now, in the second game Mc is truly a good protagonist [not the hero but the protagonist look up the term] and i advise howver had the patience to read the 100 chps will love 100-300 of the second game. Mind you, the author is slow asf in uploading new chp and uses chatgpt 4o for enhancing his story but i get it. Good novel bad author brainless protagonist and useless reader combine dmake this 4.6 star novel. stability of updates is shit.