As it happens, this story has become a reincarnation story, after all. Sorry for the confusion on my part.

This is not a reincarnation story. But it will tie into the Riddick series in a way that will brings us to the next installment. Note: All subsequent books will get complete rewries to tie them into this hopefully more exciting plot line.

IOKI reread the chapter. Made a few changes. Made a few edits. You were right. I think omitting the Dahl want to go back inside anyhow scene makes the chapter and Dahl stronger. Thanks.

I appreciate your comment. Thanks for taking the time to read and respond. I will go back and reread the chapter.

I hope you all liked the chapter. The next one will be published soon. And, as always, I appreciate the time you take to read my work. Thanks