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Loka_Kali

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  • Loka_Kali
    Loka_Kali2yr
    Replied to Azu_Noira

    i see i though it would portrays the mc but i didn't expect it be mc son.

    Ch 46 A Mother's Pent-up Desires
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    Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies
    Fantasy ¡ Fnatic_Fan
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  • Loka_Kali
    Loka_Kali2yr
    Replied to Photosphere

    nope he did mention when he was writing that it depicts to Aerin not her mom

    Ch 46 A Mother's Pent-up Desires
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    Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies
    Fantasy ¡ Fnatic_Fan
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  • Loka_Kali
    Loka_Kali2yr
    Replied to VALESVV

    yup.

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  • Loka_Kali
    Loka_Kali2yr
    Commented

    Nice chapter bro. i would really like to see the stepmom and son relationship soon, you know what i meean😏. I'm supporting you bro don't give up make more chapters.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

    Ch 73 Chapter 73-Changes
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    The Conquerors Path
    Fantasy ¡ Chaosking
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  • Loka_Kali
    Loka_Kali2yr
    Commented

    if she is human how can she lived more than 100 years doesn't seem to look like beautiful instead she will be looking like an old hag.

    Ch 13 Chapter 13- Finding A Teacher(Edited)
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    The Conquerors Path
    Fantasy ¡ Chaosking
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  • Loka_Kali
    Loka_Kali2yr
    Commented

    some scenes like grandmother at a train station and the girl misunderstood him is a scene from a anime of demon king ( forgot anime name ). BTW I LIKE YOUR WORK..[img=recommend]

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  • Loka_Kali
    Loka_Kali3yr
    Commented

    Sir we all want this story to continue please dont stop in the middle its the best story which i far enjoyed. Its enjoyable for suggestions i think you should add some like survival camps happens in school, fireworks festival, a festival that if a couple dance in the bone fire they will be together forever from the anime quintessential quintuplets..[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

    Ch 52 Announcement
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    The H.P.S. (Hentai Protagonist System) [Old Version]
    Anime & Comics ¡ Zakirael
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  • Loka_Kali
    Loka_Kali3yr
    Commented

    It will be a little boring if girls would come easily in his hands using hypnosis and charm, they should resist like " you are my son i'm your mother i can't do that type of things, we should'n go further than this" like this type just a suggestion though.

    Ch 7 CHAPTER 6: Pleasure
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    My Netori System: The Graceful ones
    Anime & Comics ¡ ArchbishopOfSloth
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  • Loka_Kali
    Loka_Kali3yr
    Commented

    Bro i have a suggestion why don't you add a busty police officer like it will be a new turn and something twisty plot as well and a new harem member will be there.[img=recommend][img=update][img=update] I am a greedy person[img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]

    Ch 47 Chapter 42 - The Restaurant
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    The H.P.S. (Hentai Protagonist System) [Old Version]
    Anime & Comics ¡ Zakirael
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  • Loka_Kali
    Loka_Kali3yr
    Commented

    wow this is what i'm waiting gir bro you bang it i love your story about how you potrayed the characters conversations the dialogues are also awesome bro keep it up......[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

    Ch 7 Chapter 7 - Start 2/?
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    VRMMORPG: World Online.
    Anime & Comics ¡ LoveIsHarem
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  • Loka_Kali
    Loka_Kali3yr
    Replied to Marshal_Omiga

    it would be boring if the mc dick have a mosterous size from the starting of the day of highschool, character development should be there when he would have enough hp points he would use penis enlargement. Just wait and enjoy the flow of story...

    Ch 11 Chapter 9 - Business meeting [R-18]
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    The H.P.S. (Hentai Protagonist System) [Old Version]
    Anime & Comics ¡ Zakirael
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  • Loka_Kali
    Loka_Kali3yr
    Commented

    i like it and the way you depicted it was awesome and i was happy that you haven't made the mc dick monster frim the starting becuz it would have make the story boring.... character development should be there and here i think i found they type of story i wanted...

    Ch 11 Chapter 9 - Business meeting [R-18]
    altalt
    The H.P.S. (Hentai Protagonist System) [Old Version]
    Anime & Comics ¡ Zakirael
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  • Loka_Kali
    Loka_Kali3yr
    Commented

    i was thinking that you would make Rias and Emerald humiliate without making them obey what he says then it will be boring. They should say that dont do this or stop it the MC should do force rape that would have been the best punishment for them

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  • Loka_Kali
    Loka_Kali3yr
    Commented

    i like it but from the 2 chapters i came to know that jon sister was in love with him i dont think she betrayed him before Rias came to his room.[img=update] after all its the best storyline from the beginning

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  • Loka_Kali
    Loka_Kali3yr
    Commented

    well the MC rarely sppears in this two chapters i am kind of dissapointed..

    Ch 2 Wait, let this lord do a divination.
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    Cultivation Chat Group
    Urban ¡ Legend of the Paladin
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  • Loka_Kali
    Loka_Kali3yr
    Commented

    i want jessei to be the waifu material...[img=recommend]

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  • Loka_Kali
    Loka_Kali3yr
    Commented

    bruh i really really want your story to be animated its first class and about takashi he should get more pain and hopelessness while her mother being ****ed infront of him and her sister too it will be awesome..😍😍😃😃😃

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