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some scenes like grandmother at a train station and the girl misunderstood him is a scene from a anime of demon king ( forgot anime name ). BTW I LIKE YOUR WORK..[img=recommend]
Sir we all want this story to continue please dont stop in the middle its the best story which i far enjoyed. Its enjoyable for suggestions i think you should add some like survival camps happens in school, fireworks festival, a festival that if a couple dance in the bone fire they will be together forever from the anime quintessential quintuplets..[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It will be a little boring if girls would come easily in his hands using hypnosis and charm, they should resist like " you are my son i'm your mother i can't do that type of things, we should'n go further than this" like this type just a suggestion though.
Bro i have a suggestion why don't you add a busty police officer like it will be a new turn and something twisty plot as well and a new harem member will be there.[img=recommend][img=update][img=update] I am a greedy person[img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
it would be boring if the mc dick have a mosterous size from the starting of the day of highschool, character development should be there when he would have enough hp points he would use penis enlargement. Just wait and enjoy the flow of story...
i like it and the way you depicted it was awesome and i was happy that you haven't made the mc dick monster frim the starting becuz it would have make the story boring.... character development should be there and here i think i found they type of story i wanted...
i was thinking that you would make Rias and Emerald humiliate without making them obey what he says then it will be boring. They should say that dont do this or stop it the MC should do force rape that would have been the best punishment for them
i like it but from the 2 chapters i came to know that jon sister was in love with him i dont think she betrayed him before Rias came to his room.[img=update] after all its the best storyline from the beginning
i want jessei to be the waifu material...[img=recommend]
bruh i really really want your story to be animated its first class and about takashi he should get more pain and hopelessness while her mother being ****ed infront of him and her sister too it will be awesome..đđđđđ