Ghad, the first chapter already gives me the creep! The title was indeed appropriate. Unwashed panties? Ghad! He is indeed a psycho, but a great story!
It was so brave of the author to write such a story. Tackling people with special needs; I loved it since the first chapter! Also, the vocab and writing quality, excellent!
The synopsis got me! I just find myself continuously reading it. The story flow, setting, the character themselves, it was nicely done. Keep it up, author!
What a great story! I even asked myself if I was pronouncing Naiah's name right HAHAHAHA. I love the setting, too, as well as the flow of the story.
Belinda, you're a strong girl! The moment she and Breys accidentally bumped into each other, I started shipping them. To hell with Dave, he's a total ass. Great story!
This story got me. It was great! I want to be in Dormica, too. It was like a ride in the dark; thrilling and unexpected. The first chapter already got my attention. I would definitely recommend this story.
Nice plot! Since the arrival at the mansion, it started giving me the creeps. It reminds me of The Haunting of Hill House. I was anticipating the next chapter. Keep it up!