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Cringe_Fest_02yrPostedOk so... a shameless author with a shameless review. Each chapter posted is always an improvement from the previous one. each chapter is at least 1500 words. I can promise you that this story will have many slice of life moments that can make your day. Please give it a chance. because if you don't... you would just be missing out.
- Cringe_Fest_02yrCommented
ye he's hot
Elliot(FL dad)- - Cringe_Fest_02yrCommented
yea this is how they look like as of now
Eve/Edward(cousins)- - Cringe_Fest_02yrCommented
its an older version of him in highschool
Alexander- - Cringe_Fest_02yrCommented
this is an older version of them in highschool
Kiara/Layla(Twins)- - Cringe_Fest_02yrCommented
kinda misleading ngl, thought he meant somwhere else haha
"You flatter me," Lumielle tutted back as the two finally reached the carriage, "May I kiss you?" Asterias asked—it was always their final goodbye. She nodded as he placed his lips against the back of her hand. - Cringe_Fest_02yrCommented
ok.... just cold.... took a dark turn there
A month later, a new cafe would be built in the place where the Silverton's used to own their motel. Their livelihoods stripped away, they became poor. Food became scarce as Jayna had to give up their youngest child to an orphanage due to the fact that they could not support their family. Charles was paralyzed, unable to walk—Jayna suffered greatly from the stress and the children lost their childhoods. Suffering was equal. Lumielle had made the conscious choice to bring them misery for the sake of her own gratification. Though she felt guilty, she knew that the price of power came at a cost. She was not naive enough to believe that she could place her brother on the throne without sacrifices. - Cringe_Fest_02yrCommented
take a break if u want, none will blame u
FictionOnlyReader - Author - I have no idea why, but I have gotten slow. I'm writing really slow, and the chapter content is going through a change I'm not liking. This is the second short chapter in a row. I'll try to figure it out by the new year. I'm not going to stop posting, so don't worry about it. - Cringe_Fest_02yrReplied to That_one_guy_1358
funniest thing ive heard all day
[STR: 999, DEX: 999, CON: 999, INT: 999, WIS: 999] - Cringe_Fest_02yrPosted
the writing quality is higher than my expectations which is not an easy task to do so good job, but there are some holes that i suggest the author fills up, i still don't know about the world in general, how some characters turned out in the way they are now, and lastly if you will be adding any other characters aside from the main two characters (but Im guessing it will be later in the story). but over all it's pretty good (putting the dark aside) as for everything else your doing a good job putting a limit. (its a 5 overall in my opinion)
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