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Me personally I don’t like harem story’ because to be quite honest it’s not realistic even if it is a anime world I don’t believe that any actual women or man would want to share their partner

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Yea

what Asian is she you have said she is Chinese and Korean unless she is a mix of the two I am mad confused

Yes

Thanks

Umm I don’t know if this is correct but I belive a passive would work well a idea I made was called hunter ”in the face of someone weaker then you, the user receives a 20% increase in speed, in the face of someone stronger your will recives a 15% buf”

So do you know when you will switch the worlds

Would this mean he can channel his lightning and fire through his kagune or not

I Belive a full body kagne would be the best or or maybe it’ just his arms and legs

Tokyo ghoul

I would go for any or they both sound good but don’ do some basic power like darkness or summing if you do 1

I’v have been sick the past 2 weeks so sorry if I have not updated but one should come by next wensday

Aye great chapter

I personally belive you have not projected peters personality well, I am saying that becuase first he would be freaking out way more and how he got transported to a new universe, also on how he standed up to flash I don’t think with the way Peter acts even as a adult will he use agrassion to harm another person even if they deserve it that’s just not how Spider-man is

No I think people would be confused but with it being he marvel world weirder things have happend and think about it most people would just say you shedded your body fat and got a late growth spurt that’s the whole idek behind it atleast

Possibly but I think with his mutant power he will be able to get that

I don’t think I could do a love interest any good I just think my writing is not fit for that but if I could write one I would either do Gwen or Cindy moon

Aye I have already finished the draft for tomorrows chapter and I will start a new draft tomorrow as well so look out for that