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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit1mth
    Commented

    +1

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    TM_Orbit1mth
    Commented

    Me personally I don’t like harem story’ because to be quite honest it’s not realistic even if it is a anime world I don’t believe that any actual women or man would want to share their partner

    Ch 6 Quick question
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit1mth
    Replied to Deon_Smith_9018

    ^1

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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit1mth
    Commented

    Yea

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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit2mth
    Commented

    what Asian is she you have said she is Chinese and Korean unless she is a mix of the two I am mad confused

    The chinese beauty's stomach made its presence known. Taz wasted no time, placing a bowl in front of her. Today's course was a steaming hot dish of seafood pasta, accompanied with seasoned shark meat.
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit2mth
    Commented

    Yes

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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit3mth
    Commented

    Thanks

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    TM_Orbit3mth
    Commented

    Umm I don’t know if this is correct but I belive a passive would work well a idea I made was called hunter ”in the face of someone weaker then you, the user receives a 20% increase in speed, in the face of someone stronger your will recives a 15% buf”

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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit3mth
    Commented

    So do you know when you will switch the worlds

    Ch 69 Departure of Atlas
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit3mth
    Replied to M3RL1N

    Would this mean he can channel his lightning and fire through his kagune or not

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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit3mth
    Commented

    I Belive a full body kagne would be the best or or maybe it’ just his arms and legs

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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit3mth
    Commented

    Tokyo ghoul

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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit4mth
    Commented

    I would go for any or they both sound good but don’ do some basic power like darkness or summing if you do 1

    Ch 6 [Homicide]
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit5mth
    Commented

    I’v have been sick the past 2 weeks so sorry if I have not updated but one should come by next wensday

    Ch 3 THE SPIDER-MAN!!!!
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit5mth
    Commented

    Aye great chapter

    Ch 5 chapter 5-hunters exam
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit6mth
    Posted

    I personally belive you have not projected peters personality well, I am saying that becuase first he would be freaking out way more and how he got transported to a new universe, also on how he standed up to flash I don’t think with the way Peter acts even as a adult will he use agrassion to harm another person even if they deserve it that’s just not how Spider-man is

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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit6mth
    Replied to Phil_Morris

    No I think people would be confused but with it being he marvel world weirder things have happend and think about it most people would just say you shedded your body fat and got a late growth spurt that’s the whole idek behind it atleast

    Ben " well to keep that body looks like you might need to start working out."
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit6mth
    Commented

    Possibly but I think with his mutant power he will be able to get that

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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit6mth
    Replied to Lycarus

    I don’t think I could do a love interest any good I just think my writing is not fit for that but if I could write one I would either do Gwen or Cindy moon

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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit6mth
    Commented

    Aye I have already finished the draft for tomorrows chapter and I will start a new draft tomorrow as well so look out for that

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