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TM_Orbit

TM_Orbit

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2020-11-10 JoinedGlobal
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit15d
    Posted

    Tuff fr on the dead homies on gang em on crip

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    Stranger Things: Jumper
    TV · NotSoBigShlong
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit2mth
    Posted

    Idk if this is a remake or continuation but this book was originally made by Sir Lucifer Morningstar on ff.net and has 14 chapters

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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit2mth
    Posted

    I loved your other stories and this one doesn’t disappoint either

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    MHA: One Eye'd King
    Anime & Comics · DeityOfSlumber
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit2mth
    Commented

    Mc

    I don't think I want to have the MC fuse with the Frieza family bloodline himself. Let me know who you think should eventually get the bloodline pill. It will take some time, since Frieza won't be so easy for the MC to deal with!
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    Krypton Reborn: Dragon of the Sun
    Anime & Comics · VendakSoth
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit4mth
    Posted

    Ummm yk I get you have a vision to write what you want but at the same time I gotta ask why r$p3 like let’s be honest it’s not a good thing so why promote it in your book?

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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit7mth
    Commented

    No

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    Marvel: Abysmal Spider-Man
    Anime & Comics · Othniel_Seth
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit8mth
    Posted

    I think this is a great book but at the same time there’s no real progression in the story line it took 100 chapter to get to his first nba game and then another 10 for the next one I just believe you need to start writing longer chapters that’s really the only problem with the book tbh. Lack of content and trying to make the story go at a super slow pace can have readers feeling like the books not worth to read. But great job otherwise

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    A Chance Again
    Sports · easyread
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit9mth
    Commented

    Curse teq: The art of Kagutsuchi/ this ability allows the user to gain a connection to cursed flames, these flames can burn hotter than stars and can last longer than Johnny sins. CE 3 for every sec

    Also, if anyone has interesting ideas for the random gatcha I will be glad to include those ideas if I like them. You can also recommend characters for the occasional companion card mc may pull from the gatcha.
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    Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)
    Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit9mth
    Replied to weslley

    That would be tuff asf, you would have to start off in a world where it could be like a whole lot of aliens that give different things and then going to like dc and marvel

    Also a friend of mine keeps trying to convince me to write a Ben 10 fic but I don't see possible developments in that area that'll go past 15 chapters.
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    Young Justice: Ghost
    Anime & Comics · Arokey
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit1yr
    Commented

    +1

    Ororoe munroe/Storm. Weather goddess.
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    Marvel: Son of Poseidon
    Anime & Comics · TrapcardD
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit1yr
    Commented

    +1

    Kizaru( Light)
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    X-Men: The Mighty Shiva
    Anime & Comics · TrapcardD
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit1yr
    Commented

    Me personally I don’t like harem story’ because to be quite honest it’s not realistic even if it is a anime world I don’t believe that any actual women or man would want to share their partner

    Ch 6 Quick question
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    To Become Unstoppable
    Anime & Comics · LesserCodex
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit1yr
    Replied to I_cant_choose_name

    ^1

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    Immortal Spider Man: Multiverse Traveller
    Movies · Nyxio
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit1yr
    Commented

    Yea

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    Immortal Spider Man: Multiverse Traveller
    Movies · Nyxio
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit1yr
    Commented

    what Asian is she you have said she is Chinese and Korean unless she is a mix of the two I am mad confused

    The chinese beauty's stomach made its presence known. Taz wasted no time, placing a bowl in front of her. Today's course was a steaming hot dish of seafood pasta, accompanied with seasoned shark meat.
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    The Viltrumite Irregular
    Anime & Comics · SwayStar
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit1yr
    Commented

    Yes

    [Druidic Calamity]
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    Yggdrasil: Worsap (Overlord FF)
    Anime & Comics · FoxSpy
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit1yr
    Commented

    Thanks

    Ch 23 Chapter 23
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    Custom king of kings through the multiverse
    Anime & Comics · M3RL1N
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    TM_Orbit1yr
    Commented

    Umm I don’t know if this is correct but I belive a passive would work well a idea I made was called hunter ”in the face of someone weaker then you, the user receives a 20% increase in speed, in the face of someone stronger your will recives a 15% buf”

    Ch 23 Chapter 23
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    Custom king of kings through the multiverse
    Anime & Comics · M3RL1N
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit1yr
    Commented

    So do you know when you will switch the worlds

    Ch 69 Departure of Atlas
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    The Universal Villain
    Anime & Comics · Aizen_Dleitch
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  • TM_Orbit
    TM_Orbit1yr
    Replied to M3RL1N

    Would this mean he can channel his lightning and fire through his kagune or not

    Ch 14 Chapter 14
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    Custom king of kings through the multiverse
    Anime & Comics · M3RL1N
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