I think you have outdone yourself so far. I look forward to he second book. I wonder if the second book will be better than the first. When done story so far. 😄

There are many novels I have read but this one rates as one of the best. It is interesting, exciting, attention grabbing, and unique in that it keeps you on the edge of your seat wondering what will happen next. The only complaint I have is grammer because I need to stop every once in a while to figure out what the author is trying to say. Keep up the great job.

I can not get enough of your story. It keeps me wondering what you have coming next. It is one of the best I have read yet. Keep up the great job. I look forward to reading your future stories.

It seems every time I stop reading it is at a point where the plot thickens. I must congratulate you on your ability to keep the reader interested. Keep up the great job. God bless.

I like the way way you seem to keep the interest of the reader by adding into the story plots within plots. Just when I think I know what will happen you throw in a twist. I like it. Keep up the good work 😁

So far your story line has not disappointed me at all. Keep up the great job.

Reading this story has me wondering what is going to happen next. It is distracting for the readers but it shows talent by how well the author keeps the readers attention. Keep up the great work.

This story line is really good. It would be even better with the grammer fixed. Sometimes you need to stop reading to understand what is being said due to the grammer mistakes. Great job otherwise and I look forward to reading more. 😃

Great story line so far. Really draws me in. Keep up the good work.

Very engaging. Keeps me wondering what is coming next. Cannot wait for the next chapter. God bless

This chapter keeps you wondering where you are. I am looking forward to more chapters that keep you on the edge of your seat

Being so short why separate it into two chapters. Or am I missing the main chapter. Well I guess I will find out when I read the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for the chapter :)

I can not wait to see if she does the alchemy class too. She will be way op

I like your story. I want to keep reading. BTW would you like for me to correct some of your errors you have in your story by posting them in comments. Up to you. Keep up the great job.