Hayate_Yuuji

Well, the premise is good, but the story is poorly written; the dialogues are often repeated, either literally or with different words, and there are abrupt cuts in some paragraphs.Furthermore, the protagonist feels the need to hide his identity, but there's no mention of him wearing a mask or anything like that during his heroic acts; he's simply not recognized 🤡

The only problem would be writing a character that intelligent all the time 🤡

At the end of the movie, the MC had managed to get a permanent dose of NZT or something like that, and if my memory serves me right, there's something similar in the series too, so it's not impossible to have a permanent effect.

Shane is overcomplicating the business plans; it's almost as if he has an entire team to manage so many clients with in-depth customer service.

I hope that Hades in this fanfic doesn't suffer from the great prejudice that pop culture has always applied simply because he is the God of the underworld/death.

The author forgot about the sin mushroom placed on Kaguya.

Why isn't Keva an osmosian?

Wasn't that rift created collaboratively by Kyogre, Rayquaza, and Groudon?

Shouldn't he be able to eat 3 Devil Fruits? After all, if 1.0 heart increases the possible number, and naturally a person can only eat 1, that makes 3 in total, 1 naturally and 2 because of the bounty.