Looks like everyone wants a piece of Elize! 🙄

Well done Author. You’ve shyed away from these scenes before, but have written it beautifully. I love my smut, I love the thrill. Thank you Dear. The story may be slow for some, but I enjoy how descriptive each scene is. There will always be critics, but keep your chin up and keep going. Can’t wait to see how it all comes together ❤️

I don’t think I care much for these elces with their noses in the air. I hope they get knocked down a few pegs.

What a spectacle this would be. I feel like someone should toss the Zhouyu a chunk of meat to let him know it’s ok.

Oh boy. Big bad wolfy gonna throw a big bad fit 🙄

Oh no, that’s all she needs. More honey 😆

Oh this poor girl 🤦🏼‍♀️ Keep it in your pants you two!!

It’s nice that Elize is all happy right now, but the destiny hovering over her doesn’t match. It makes me sad that this happiness can’t last, not if she wants her true happiness in the end.

I love this story and cannot wait to see what happens next! Don’t slack in your studies though 😉

I saw that coming, but am so glad.

Good first chapter. I’m already interested in the characters and want to know what happens next. Ivy seems like a fun girl, I can’t wait to get to know her better.

Interesting visit with the selkies. Jealousy doesn’t look good on Elize. Lloyd needs to remember that Elize can’t be his. So much drama!

I agree. The grammatical errors are making it a little difficult to read. Good story so far though.

I love these kids! I can’t stop smiling when they’re around .

I wish Zack would grow a pair and tell Eun Ae to F off! She does not take a hint.

I feel bad for Lloyd. He has to stand by while she goes through pain after pain, all while knowing he can’t have her till her next reincarnation. That’s got to suck. I don’t have that kind of patience.

Ok, thank you , I got confused .

This illusion is hot! How much is it going to mess with Lloyd?

When will Elize learn that sneaking around gets her nowhere good?! Just stay put and enjoy girl time for once!

This girl haa no idea how attached she is to Lloyd. Silly girl.