kingretard

the fight was quite good, but the Mc is kinda dumb to think that the boss would stick to a single move set like how kirito did, then the Ai tree directly describing how other Ai npc's work in conversations, plus the very quick relationship with asuna?...it started good, but then progressed into this action/romance with the anime female lead.

5 chapters in from my last comment, and it's s till going good, the relationship is progressing quick, I hope not too quickly and thats all I can think about for right now, will update on a later chap.

chapter one seems good, im expecting the same quality later on.

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