I really liked how I wrote each word. I have dedicated a lot to this work.On the other hand, it is an original novel without copies or inspiration in others. This was all part of a dream I had.
I liked it but in the paragraph where you say that those who died passed the academy test, I don't understand, did they die? or Did they die but were still alive like an immortal mutant?
Ch 2 Chapter 1 - Three, Two, One
Dysfunctional - An Assassin's Guide to Reincarnating in Another World