How has he already forgotten that he read a history book that mentioned the 1st Great King and his forgotten prophecy? It's been less than a week for him and that title isn't easy to forget

I may be wrong, but I believe Wu Wudi means "Invincible"

Chapters are out of order. pls fix

This is basically a much worse version of Creating Artifact Spirits To Be My Wives. Author cuts to new scenes with no warning, has worse writing, and doesn't feel engaging at all

"she's not even 21 yet!"it might be a typo but how old is she then?

Chapter is basically posted twice. pls fix

Why not wear the set from the Sandworm King? We haven't seen anything from this Goblin King set, but he's wearing that instead?

The story is interesting, but seems like a knockoff of Black Internet Cafe. Wish the author focused on making actual games and not just transforming movies to games

Author seems to be losing track of names in this chapter

If they know there's a 3 day rejection period, why have anyone go to the school during that time?

Author make up your mind. Soul Formation or Divine Transformation, you must pick one or the story will continue losing cohesion

Grammar still needs some work, but is an amazing read otherwise! I do wish you luck with slogging through some of the more... grammatically challenged sections of the story