I just finished reading this first chapter and like woaah, I'm really attracted to this world and I really want to know what happens next. You did a very good job at writing this and did a good job at the world building and character development. Keep up the good work!

Really great story so far

hey thanks for the thought, the beast kind of turns away from Simon. The beast is about to tear Simon apart, but he found that little gap where he could escape