The story is very interested but i think you should have give an explain about mentality of the character . overall this Is a good story' and i can't wait for next chapter
This Is a very great story' and very interested story' . I'm very like it , this story' looks like an Urban legend story' . The character Is very interested and i can't wait for the next chapter
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The story' Is very great and very interesting . Your writing is good and you can make me feel like I'm the character .
i can't wait for the next chapter
It's a very good story' and I'm so interested to read a new chapter . The background of this story' Is very good too . Your writing quality not bad too
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Overall the story is very interested , but there is a little error in the grammar writing . But it's okay you can't prove It more , for me your story' Is very interested
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