it's rin and sakura from fate

guardian of earth? haha

strange that the shop never full, even though it only have 4 Tables if i remember correctly and the food is good too. people should line up to eat

They fear the Uchiha because of the power they have, but that is also the reason they were chosen to protect Konoha. Maybe because it was a peaceful era, they didn't think about what the consequences would be if the Uchiha clan disappeared. so one way to save the uchiha clan is to make them feel needed, create chaos until konoha feels they can't handle it themselves

the story so far is good, character development also well written. but i think the story pace is a little too slow, almost 50 chap and he's not even in academy yet, but for now i think this is proper naruto fanfic

m sure it's translated from chinese using google translate

yes you need food to replenish stamina, even in video game stamina can be depleted and you need something to refill it

I don't know exactly how the naming system is like in Japan, but it doesn't make sense that you can give other family name casually, especially if the giver doesn't use the same surname. And yuuta is more like given name in my opinion.............................. well it's your story so whatever

it's just my opinion, but I think the story pace is too slow. it's more than 100 chapters but the story is too focused on the development within the clan and very little to do with the world of Naruto itself. i can't even remember the last time kaito ever left konoha and do something that may affect the story, was that even ever mentioned? or maybe he didn't do it in the first place? from the first chapter till now(130)?

well, still better than kuro or shiro

i mean it's similar to steins gate, you may know what may happen in the next 5 sec, but what about the next 10sec? you would not know until it happen, and not all problem can be solved with strengh only. solving one problem at specific time doesnt mean the world will stop messing with you

how old is kakashi?

thanks for the chap!!!

thanks for the chap !!!, love the concept

typical chinese

might be true if he can't save them all, but I don't think it's difficult for him to smuggle some. especially if he learn how to use the portal

bob.. bob uchiha

6 weeks?

thanks for the chapter !!!!

hmm, I can't think why Naruto could be so determined to get recognition from people in Konoha. and in your story this situation looks worse because it looks more detailed, but naruto is still the 7th hokage like the original story, and it seems he still has a cheerful character. so i hope you can focus more on this part, why did he become the naruto we know even though he seems to have a darker past and what difference did it make when he was adopted by sasuke's family.