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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte1mth
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    I'll just say i read this instead of paying attention in class cuz it's really magical, really well made and overall it's perfect!! keep it up!!!

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    Keepers
    Fantasy · afrikan
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte1mth
    Posted

    there's nothing to say other than, i want to be in that world... it's magnificent!!! i love it!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update] keep it up!!!

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    The Business of Wishes
    Fantasy · daygonyuuki
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte1mth
    Posted

    the synopsis is really good, it's catchy. when it comes to the story as it is, the first few chapters feel rather heavy and overwhelming, the characters feel a bit plain too, but with the development of the story they start gaining volume and become for tridimensional. overall it is a good story. though i would have loved to see distributing details more evenly throughout the story and catching little details later on, rather than being told how the characters are right away. keep it up

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    A Possessive Mafia Leader
    Contemporary Romance · 4Maggievasiredz
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte2mth
    Posted

    The writing is ok, but I can't separate the dialogs from the narrative, i can't identify the change between characters and I cant understand what's happening. the story is good once you pay attention, but it's hard to tell. keep up, don't give up!

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    The Wrong Turn....
    Horror&Thriller · Y.R. Novella
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte2mth
    Posted

    i can't understand the universe yet, but the story is interesting, the writing does lack a bit of polishing but is good. the main character seems a bit overpowered but Its ok. good job overall

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    Mated To A Vampire
    Eastern Fantasy · DIVINE
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte2mth
    Posted

    THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I feel bad for MC (cuz i havent read her name yet) but it feels desply relatable. sO much that somehow it hurts. great woek author![img=update][img=update]

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    Scarred little devil
    Horror&Thriller · babb13.ella
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte2mth
    Posted

    i love the characters a lot!! they are absolute dumbasses but I love em!!! the story is also awesome, this goes to my reading!!! keep up the good work!!!

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    You Won't Understand Me
    LGBT+ · Trusha
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte2mth
    Commented

    i find it funny that Author censors the cuss words

    Ch 1 Love at first sight
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    You Won't Understand Me
    LGBT+ · Trusha
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte2mth
    Posted

    kts a really good story, the first chapters are quite confusing for me but as you keep reading you catch up the tiny details . keep up the good work!!

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    Mia Isn't a baby girl
    Contemporary Romance · Black Flute of Love
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte2mth
    Posted

    THE VOCABULARY IS IMMACULATE, THE WRITING PERFECT AND CATCHING, AND OH SO TRUTH SPEAKING. I FUCKING ADORE IT AND IT SPEAKS FOR ITSELF, I LOVE IT

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    When WOMEN Speak
    Fantasy Romance · Oluchi
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte2mth
    Posted

    This tupe of storis aint my cup of tea, but this oNe is really well written! Contrats author-chan! keep up the good work!! [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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    Life On The Road
    Competitive Sports · Neil Lakeman
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte2mth
    Commented

    Nice.... YOU ACTUALLY USED THE SPANISH PROPERLY!!

    “ I’ll try my best,” I said before heading to the barn. At the entrance was a man in his late sixties, wearing typical farm attire. Looking at him you’d never guess he was a successful professional wrestler in his prime, wrestling as the luchador Asesino Silencioso. He had retired nearly a decade ago and ran a small wrestling school for his independent promotion on his farm located a few miles outside Laurel Montana.
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    Life On The Road
    Competitive Sports · Neil Lakeman
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte2mth
    Posted

    ITS REALLY GOOD!! I REALLY LIKE IT! I can aready see where the story is going and i can feel the dramma approach as i read Plus the wRiting is impecable Keep up the good work!

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    Cheated and Pregnant
    Contemporary Romance · Shanny
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte2mth
    Replied to glariex_x

    I'm sorry about the update stability... i don't have much time to write tbh...

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    A White Bouquet
    Contemporary Romance · Latte
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte2mth
    Posted

    the background of the story is good, though a bit unclear, I wish there were paragraph separations, it all seems like one block of text... it can definitely improve and it has hella potential! keep going!

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    The Mate Hunt
    Horror&Thriller · NayramAyram
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte2mth
    Posted

    historical based reading? i love those, though the dialogs are long, the writing is nice and quite easy to digest . keep up the good work!!!

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    SULTAN
    Contemporary Romance · Atinuke
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte2mth
    Posted

    the writing is nice, though some research would come in fitting . the development of the story is one I like and it was genious to use a different language for code places.

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    Dreaming Destiny
    Eastern Fantasy · glenzyeahhh
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte2mth
    Commented

    this one IS well conjugated

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    Dreaming Destiny
    Eastern Fantasy · glenzyeahhh
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte2mth
    Commented

    it's not really well conjugated, it would be "Casa escondite" or "Casa escondida" esconder is the base form of the verb .

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    Dreaming Destiny
    Eastern Fantasy · glenzyeahhh
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  • oni_latte
    oni_latte2mth
    Commented

    casa esconder is in spanish right???

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    Dreaming Destiny
    Eastern Fantasy · glenzyeahhh
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