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Melicans1yrCommentedOverall a great story. My only criticism would be that the ending felt way too rushed after 700 chapters of buildup. I don't mean that the fight was too short, but the closure that came after. It was almost disappointing reading so much to have it end that way, without saying goodbye to all the characters and just having it "Rose did this, Katherine did that". Even Raven, who was built up to be such an integral character, didn't show up at all and was only mentioned. I wish there was more Gina, Louise, Louise's sister, Raven, the mother and daughter and step-daughter, and so on.
Ch 733 The Beginning, The End [End]- Melicans2yrCommented
Gee, I wonder why?
The king heaved a sigh. "… You know that the boy is a danger to the kingdom, father. He does not have any good feelings for Alterna, and several foreign organizations are behind him. If he wants to seek revenge, or if he decides he wants to become the king, it will be a catastrophe for the kingdom. In the worst of the cases, Alterna could perish." - Melicans2yrCommented"S-Someone spread the news that there is a Heart of the Forest in Academy City. And the people of the Church of the Sun God are asking about it."
- Melicans2yrCommented"You don't need to worry about it." Bloed smiled softly at her. "We will find a way to resolve it when the time comes."
- Melicans2yrCommentedBloed smiled bitterly and raised his hands as though giving up.
- Melicans2yrCommentedFeeling the soft skin of the princess and the sweet fragrance of her hair, Bloed became spellbound. He could not help but kiss her neck impulsively, making the elf princess gasp and moan softly.
- Melicans2yrCommentedI swear I'll personally tear your heart out of your chest.
- Melicans2yrCommented"Yeah, yeah, she is not. Anyway, I can help her. But… Bloed, you know how valuable a Heart of the Forest is, right?"
- Melicans2yrCommentedThe sudden change surprised the draconians. The draconian charging towards her could not help but stop in shock as he looked at the immense mana around Rose.
- Melicans2yrCommentedWhen they realized the situation, they instinctively roused their mana and tried to counterattack and shout to warn the rest of the camp about the attack. But right then, Saintess Safelia's voice sounded.
- Melicans2yrCommented"… Whores, what do you think you are doing?" Emilia's chilling voice sounded in the girls' ears.
- Melicans2yrReplied to DaoistVraaIp
Seirei Gensouki
"Men. Prepare everything. We will go back to the kingdom. It looks like my husband needs to be taught a lesson." - Melicans2yrReplied to DaoistVraaIp
Seirei Gensouki
She wanted to have him for herself. She wanted to get rid of the flies hanging out around him. She wanted to be the only one in his eyes.