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DatOneDevil4mthCommentedLoving it so far, but I feel like your characterization of Gil feels off. I understand that you are slowly easing him into the role but he still lacks the grandeur and pompous attitude you would expect from him.
● So, did you guys enjoy last chapter? I tried to make a little longer dialogue. I suck at those, of course if I really want to, I should be able to make a very good one, but it will tire the duck out of me. I like to think I am good at descriptions and action scenes, but we will see. Anyways, did you guys find anything strange? Is there anything I should better? The length is nice? Should I make longer chapters? Talk to me people!! :(- DatOneDevil4mthPosted
This fic is a reupload. The original is called 'A Demon Lord's Hero', written by Fahad09 and can be found on Fanfiction.net.
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