This is pretty good so far. I think just a little editing is needed, and the characters are all very mysterious and interesting. Curious to know where this story goes in the future!

Good story so far! You really feel for the mc as a reader and just get thrown right in! Lots of grammar mistake, easy fix, look forward to reading more from the author!

Very hooked so far so far so good. Johnson character is very relatable and now he has a stranger to take care of who is frankly adorable. Good character interactions. More often updates will help with views. Thanks for your story!