Marek_Daynes
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Marek_Daynes1hReplied to Canine_9_6438The Harvester as a species could be compared to vampires, Psionic vampires to be exact and in a way what Eywa did minutes ago to the Queen was make her equivalent of a stomach and digestive system explode.- Marek_Daynes1dReplied to chocolatechipsrule"Shit, what are they feeding this child?" cursed the captain as he looked at Levi who didn't seem to be tired as he kept fighting the three of them to a standstill not losing momentum at all.
- Marek_Daynes1dReplied to L0st_3368"Yes it's about time for him to experience his real first batt… " saying so Tenzin paused, noticing his mistake before continuing, "... His first real battle against other people I mean, it will be beneficial for him, plus the sooner he's done with it the better it is for him and there won't be that much danger during the next mission. It's perfect for him, what could go wrong?."
- Marek_Daynes4dCommentedCh 50 DEPRESSED ME (* _ *)
- Marek_Daynes9dCommentedCh 7 Magical Armor
- Marek_Daynes14dReplied to TheCultivatingDuckPlus, the one that the Thalmor captain sent a message to was fucking Elenwen! Fantastic! She can go prove her so called Elven "Superiority" in bed with Ulfric in the future.
- Marek_Daynes17dReplied to The_man_The_mythI turn to check on Skitter and saw that she had already taken down the other bandit. They lay on the ground, their eyes destroyed and holes in their necks.
- Marek_Daynes25dCommented
You have improved the quality very much You are doing good
This book has been deleted. - Marek_Daynes28dCommented
As long as you realize your mistake. You're fine. It's always good to check back and look at your story. That's what most creators do
This book has been deleted. - Marek_Daynes28dCommented"Good old lady liberty," I muttered, savoring the taste of fresh surface air as I swam toward the shore. "Thanks for the ride, buddy. Feel free to head back now," I added, turning to give the oversized dolphin a grateful pat on its sleek, glistening flank. With a joyful squeal, it dove beneath the waves, disappearing into the vast expanse of the ocean.
- Marek_Daynes29dCommentedBut wait, there's more! More tendrils came squirming at me from every direction, like a bad case of tentacle flu. I figured, why not crank up the dazzle? I pumped even more light magic into my blade raising it high in the air and making them shine brighter than a disco ball at a vampire rave. The thugs stumbled back, blinking like they'd just stared into the sun.
- Marek_Daynes1mthCommented"Yipee.."
- Marek_Daynes1mthPosted
I am sorry, but this writing is so terrible. It's like AI generated But to enough of degree Bad The story development is not even that good It just immediately goes into action.The mc is just like a robot Everything is too straight forward. Of the characters don't even question the surroundings It's just like a line except cringing
- Marek_Daynes2mthReplied to HereForGoodRead[ Cultivation Method: Amber of Darkness ]
- Marek_Daynes2mthCommentedAlexander explained"It has modes like Strength mode, which increase the user's strength.Then Speed mode which has speed, flight mode for flying, and last stealth mode for invisibility."
- Marek_Daynes2mthCommented"I don't know what this technique is, I don't know who you are, where you're from, but..." at these words, the man stood up and walked towards us. He passed through the wall of fire and took a few more steps towards us until he stopped in front of me. He was a well-preserved, determined, still young-looking man with black hair falling down his back and a long, pointed beard, "I personally, as a father, am grateful to you for what you did for my daughter. And as the Fire Lord, I am even more grateful to you for giving our lineage a chance to continue ruling the Fire Nation and not be swept away just because of an unfortunate incident that happened to my daughter. Thank you."
- Marek_Daynes2mthCommentedCh 129 Chapter 11 Alt POV
- Marek_Daynes2mthReplied to HooLeeFuk[Breath of flames- Ninth Form: Rengoku]
- Marek_Daynes2mthReplied to LeBronJames23"Thanks for that. Here." Rimuru threw two more gold coins to Nahida. "Buy the things for me and spend the rest on whatever you want."