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Titan_Alpha5mthCommentedCh 24 Chapter 24: I'm a Water Ghost, About to Drown?- Titan_Alpha7mthReplied to Nii07
what I am saying is that according to soul society laws she will die as a direct participant and descendant of the main branch so you should say this au soul society is brutal as in canon if you want to save her
Yoruichi nodded, "Excellent, we're all on the same page. We'll work together to take down the Ankoku family head and his wife while making sure Kira is safe. We can't let the forbidden kido continue to control her. Let's keep each other informed and report any updates to Kisuke as soon as possible." - Titan_Alpha7mthReplied to
how brutal the soul society laws are and how they treat the loser or the traitors they don't even spare the innocent if a family is proved traitors the point I am making is it doesn't matter if kira is innocent or not if her family is impaled she is executed because she is the direct Descendants of the family like sÔya as he was child when he was ordered to be executed with his family
Yoruichi nodded, "Excellent, we're all on the same page. We'll work together to take down the Ankoku family head and his wife while making sure Kira is safe. We can't let the forbidden kido continue to control her. Let's keep each other informed and report any updates to Kisuke as soon as possible." - Titan_Alpha7mthCommented
before writing further I would like to suggest searching for Azashiro Family in the bleach on wiki.
Yoruichi nodded, "Excellent, we're all on the same page. We'll work together to take down the Ankoku family head and his wife while making sure Kira is safe. We can't let the forbidden kido continue to control her. Let's keep each other informed and report any updates to Kisuke as soon as possible." - Titan_Alpha7mthReplied to Titan_Alpha
the point I am making is who talks like that
Yoruichi smiled, "You both are too humble. Your growth is a result of both hard work and helping each other. You push each other to be the best versions of yourselves, and that's what will make you both strong. So anyways how about spending the night here it'll be like old times." - Titan_Alpha7mthCommented
rather than bleach fanfiction I feel like reading those Japanese novels where the Protagonist and the people around is dumb and naive
Yoruichi smiled, "You both are too humble. Your growth is a result of both hard work and helping each other. You push each other to be the best versions of yourselves, and that's what will make you both strong. So anyways how about spending the night here it'll be like old times." - Titan_Alpha7mthCommented
this is the third time you use the same lines differently
Despite the difficulty of the training, Yuichi found himself longing for it. He was fascinated by the way SuĂŹ-FÄng taught, always pushing him to his limits and beyond. With her guidance, he learned to use HohĆ and Hakuda in ways he had never considered before, and he was eager to continue learning. - Titan_Alpha7mthCommented
see the same thing you should write to other good writers as they don't keep repeating the same format again and again
The training sessions with YĆ«shirĆ and SuĂŹ-FÄng were intense and demanding. Mei was trained by YĆ«shirĆ who pushed her to her limits, pushing her to new heights in HohĆ and Hakuda. Yuichi, on the other hand, was taught by SuĂŹ-FÄng who took a more hands-on approach. - Titan_Alpha7mthCommented
can stop doing this we know he is grateful but you don't have to write 1/3 of the chapter just to write how he feels about every little detail or how grateful he is to others not to mention it's started to get annoying If you keep repeating that
The two of them made their way back to the mansion, discussing their future training plans and catching up on each other's lives. As they walked, Yuichi couldn't help but truly feel grateful for Mei's guidance and support. She had been a great mentor and he was looking forward to continuing their training and sparring sessions in the future. - Titan_Alpha9mthReplied to OtakuSumit
it was before when he entered the city and it was mentioned when he bought their casino of their family that deal was struck
"You bought us, so we are your slaves now." Amira bitterly said. "We don't get to have a say in any of this, do we?" - Titan_Alpha10mthReplied to Folfy
the singer sister of second protagonist appears in novel the rebirth of immortal cultivatior template
"Who?" He curiously asked. "Alana?" - Titan_Alpha11mthCommented
what does this "??" means?
Status/Info: Dead. ?? - Titan_Alpha3yrCommented
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It seemed that the Wolf Girl and the Black-haired beauty knew that the fight going on in the forest has ended; However, they didn't know who the victor was, and their heart palpitated in fear but hope-filled their eyes as the sounds of footstep came closer and a young man covered in blood stepped out from behind the trees. - Titan_Alpha3yrReplied to HNIC409Ch 63 Chapter 63: Face slapping
- Titan_Alpha3yrCommentedCh 63 Chapter 63: Face slapping
- Titan_Alpha3yrCommentedCh 48 Chapter 48: The fortress (a)
- Titan_Alpha3yrCommentedCh 48 Chapter 48: The fortress (a)
- Titan_Alpha3yrCommentedCh 113 Second Year (IV) & Dear Old Lucy... {EDITED}
- Titan_Alpha3yrReplied to ClearSkySageCh 253 Soul: [Shunpo] is pretty good.