Tenkeneki
My favorite hobby is procrastinating and I have a huge imagination.
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Also, I feel like I had too many plot holes, but you know what they say, you're your own worst critic.
Yeah, I know. I tried to get to a point that I planned and unconsciously rushed the story. Although later I tried to slow things down a bit. This is my first novel so I appreciate the criticism.
Gacha be like.
This is my first review so take it easy. This story is one of the best I have ever read. The entire concept, I know, is not new, but the author does put a unique spin on the idea. Having the four horsemen of the apocalypse was a beautiful idea. It's something that should be in more novels. The amount of religious stuff and folklore really taught me a few things. I also like the concept of people. like devout Catholics, being in denial of the gods, it really makes the story seem realistic. The characters are really well written. I like how Lazar's personality is kept static throughout the entire novel. Cold and logical personalities are very common, but I like them so who cares? Anyway, Lazar's relationship with others will most likely need to be worked on. I don't really like the idea of him doing things for his own benefit and pushing people that seem useless away from him(That might be the intention, I have no idea). But all in all, this story is really good :)