I don’ like it, it’s too short, add a little more. Good overall.

Excited to see how this goes.

+1

I will be writing two chapter each week, but will be after I come back from school.

I changed this to War Fan

Sorry for the late reply, it is Solo Leveling | Angelic Love Author - Dream_Jun

Sorry for replying late, it's Solo Leveling | Angelic Love Author - Dream_Jun

I have deleted the chapters from the previous version and am making a new one with more originality, on Wattpad, I recommend you read it there as there is more context.

It is

*like*

I like to think that this could become a great novel because it has a very interesting beginning as a part of the gol d roger crew. I think that this would do great just dOnt put harem.

I loved it, it is a nice story and has everything I want like an pretty strong mc and is emotional near the end after reading this for the second or third time.

That's pretty sus.

He will be as strong as Jin-Woo and more magically powerful but will be a little bit shorter for my relationship preferences.

BL means Boy's Love or like boy x boy, love interest is a man and the mc is a man.

There isn't to much of Min-Jun talking or interacting because I just didn't know what to write with him there and most of this was based from the manga, and most of the dialogue was from there, I just couldn't add more to this but rest assured the next chapters will have him talking more and this was just more of him being there just to get the system, to help Jin-Woo; to make it easier for me.

Yeah he is.

I will try to make at least 1 chapter per day if I can because I want to try and keep writing this story because I don't write a lot and this will probably be the first so far that I will continue writing for.

But with yellow eyes