The pacing is slow but not that bad. Many characters have been introduced in the first few chapters which I guess will have a lot of impact to the story later. Nothing else to say right now except that it can go anywhere. But it has a lot of potential!

I love dark fantasy and more so if it is powered by romance. Reading the first chapter gave me that vibe so I am reading this for sure. So, why was the first chapter so short? I wanna read more!!

Now, this is amazing! The way you write every chapter giving hints of MCs' past through his emotions makes me want to read more and more. The type of novel I was looking for!