Hope you're doing well, I hope to read your novel as you keep writing. fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

I'm currently in the middle of rereading Shadow Slave and as soon as I finish, I'll check this out. The novel seems very interesting and I have high hopes that this will be a masterpiece.

Greatest Story ever written, really enjoying everything about it. The main character is goated but the female lead Nephis is soo cool. She's the best female lead ever, I love her. The power system and sunny's power is also great.

he did it.

I am going to expand on their characters inside this arc and hopefully after they get fleshed out and expanded on they'll be likeable, I honestly skipped through character progression, saving it for this arc to properly allow the other characters to get their shine.

I'm thinking no for now, i kinda want him to be like the avatarish but still not that op. So instead of progressing the number of ability slots I'll allow those abilities he stole to grow and get stronger like any other.

As you can see I'm still figuring out things about the story along the way, I even changed the name, as my vision for the story has changed.

I just think that because they were children of a Ducal and were the same age, they grew up as friends and rivals. So because one of them got something the other 2 would feel entitled to also get the same treatment out of jealousy.

I think he's quite a loner because of his upbringing, but after spending some time interacting with people I think he would become an introvert rather than a loner.

Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it. I don't really plan on locking the chapters for this book for a long time, as I'm really not doing it seriously. I don't really edit lmao, I just write for my enjoyment then publis. I really like the concept of this novel, so I might just keep going until maybe 50 chapters or a hundred chapters, before I completely edit the book and clean it up from the beginning.

Hello everyone this is my first webnovel I'm writing, I don't know much about writing, I probably suck and you most likely won't like the story. This is for me, I was just struggling to find a webnovel perfect for me, I don't like annoying main characters who was a fat loser and gains powers and then just tries to get girls. I always liked a anti-hero protagonist who does whatever he wants and isn't afraid to kill as many people as it takes.

I really like this novel, this novel is really making me get into the superhero genre.