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Sweet_SourKiwi

Sweet_SourKiwi

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it's not easy to find true love so when you have it grab it tight ^^ I loves my stories more than anyone else, its all my precious baby ^^ IG: ly.chen03 Sweet_sourKiwi#6280

2020-11-04 JoinedIndonesia
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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi22d
    Replied to Summer_Scott_1541

    thanks Summer, really appreciated all the support, God bless us and all of our family 馃檹馃檹馃檹

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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi1mth
    Replied to SeaStar

    Thanks for stopping by and dropping a review, I appreciated that you spend your time on this, but maybe you shouldn't read this because it's hard for your to understand, and btw the cover is not stolen, it was borrowed as some does here, have a nice day ^^

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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi1mth
    Posted

    Wow, I have no words to say but to say this author is a genius, the book is awesome, fully respect to author who can write novels with a system which I thought it's so hard, and this book is written so nice, really curious in what happens next! [img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    My Omni-Ability System in a Parallel World
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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi2mth
    Posted

    Hello, I score my self perfect, hehe everybody do that, this for encourage our self to the best, this is the old collection I have and try to publish it now, this sweet story of love with a fantasy romance kind of, hope you like it^^

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    ULTIMATE LOVER : HEART OF THE DRAGON
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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi2mth
    Posted

    OMo, i haven't read this but it looks delicious, can't wait to dive in! keep it up Thor!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    The Mafia Boys' Contract Marriage [BL]
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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi2mth
    Posted

    Oh my, I just start read this and my heart began to jump in surprise, you do have too many confusing words but I think that as a Writer's own character, it will be better by the time, and the story is great, I just read to Chp 3 but can't wait to make some comments, hahaha, keep updating Thor! it's better if you can update it routine or multiple chapters a day and consistent, keep going![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi2mth
    Replied to Sweet_Vanilla553

    thanks for stopping by, unfortunately, the cover is not mine, still borrow it ^^

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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi2mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi2mth
    Replied to maylily_jk

    already 馃槉馃槉

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    EMPEROR CONSORT AND THE DUKE : SECOND CHANCE ROMANCE (BL)
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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi2mth
    Posted

    It's nice to read this, it reminds me of the story I used to read, so far just minor errors and a little missing punctuation on each paragraph but for the story itself, it's great, keep it up thor, you have potential here!

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    The Deal With The Deviless
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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi2mth
    Commented

    I need to take a deep breath before reading this because it has no punctuation, just simply put comma and dot, it will be nicer to read

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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi2mth
    Commented

    this scene is great but lacks punctuation, don't know where to start or where to stop, just keep it up Thor!

    Akuji trembles a bit, her eyes were filled with the blood and rage for a little while then she comes back to her senses and says "I have seen with my eyes my siblings who were captured, 2 elder sisters and one younger brother, my brother was at the tender age of 10 he was going from one castle that was under danger of being attacked to another safe castle but during the way he was attacked by the angles on the way he was captured and brought to humans, I was at the time hiding from the enemy then I saw that he was alive and on stage chained in the middle of town surrounded by the human army they first threw rocks at him then they brought ants and released on him, he was screaming and the human were laughing and gods were sitting watching him scream they laughed and laughed they placed bets for how long will it take to kill him, but the poison that was in my brothers body killed the aunts but he was bleeding then they chained him with a pole and left him in the middle of the town he was there for 8 days until he died but before he died the crows and other birds used to come to eat his flesh he was still alive while they were eating him, they fell on the ground one after another yet they kept on coming and I was powerless to do anything."
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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi2mth
    Posted

    This is good, I don't really like the system kind of story but the words you put in there make it nice to read, that's what I can't, hahaha, so far pretty good story thor, hope you can keep it up more chapters,

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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi2mth
    Posted

    This is good, I missed the character's name, but so far so good, as coming into another world, keep it up thor![img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    The Help Club President is a Demon Lord
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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi2mth
    Posted

    This is good, I read a few chapters and it's thrilling every time I read it, it's a pretty good story although the world background is still a little bit confusing, so far so good thor, keep it up!

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    The Reddest Red
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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi3mth
    Posted

    Wooh, another BL, this is what I like it, really like to read it and being attached to the scenes, you do a good job on the story, I don't really pay attention to the English but I thinks its way better than mine, hahaha, keep it up Thor, you doing great job!

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    EMPEROR CONSORT AND THE DUKE : SECOND CHANCE ROMANCE (BL)
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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi3mth
    Replied to Flower_Something

    thanks for your review, yeah I think so may repetition, need to update it, thanks

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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi3mth
    Posted

    It's nice to read this, well good and neat written, I love how you put the words to make your readers keep reading them, great potential here, keep it up thor!

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    A dropped book
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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi3mth
    Replied to Hasnain_Ali_Tagar

    your welcome ^^ Good luck!

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  • Sweet_SourKiwi
    Sweet_SourKiwi3mth
    Posted

    So far I just found too much punctuation, but the story has potential, just keep it updates regularly and you'll get the result, keep it up thor^^

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