Really interesting story and idea. I quite enjoy the style and I am curious where the author will take the plot. :D There are a few minor grammar mistakes, but nothing detrimental.

I really like the idea behind the novel, it has the potential to be a really interesting and fun one. With the exception of a few grammar errors, the novel is quite good :D

Middle is indeed repetitive, but it does become good again towards the end

Congrats on the amazing story once again. Probably one of my favourite moments is in chapter 242 and chapters before it. The scene where Shirk massacres the entire banquet and reveals who she is. There are many more great moments, but I decided to vote for this one