Jesen_Kelvis

😂😂

And there's so much AI—and what's worse is that instead of improving, the author is actually getting worse by using even more AI. 😂😂

I really appreciate your novel; there are very few lawyer or prosecutor novels, and even fewer about the Law & Order series. I just wanted to point something out: the District Attorney's office is not subordinate to the police. In chapter 14, I see the police captain calling the prosecutor to speak with him as a subordinate, so I just wanted to give this reminder: the U.S. District Attorney's office is subordinate only to the DA.

The author who wrote this either has psychopathic tendencies or is already one. The protagonist is a police officer because he can kill without much consequence, and his racism towards Afro-African people is terrifying. I highly recommend that you don't read it; the person who wrote it either really has psychopathic tendencies or is already one.

You took the words right out of my mouth 😂

I feel the same way

There's so much dialogue that I don't think I'm reading a hot-blooded novel, but rather a novel about logical reasoning. The beginning is good, but then the protagonist suddenly starts appearing lazy, lecherous, often hides his strengths, spends most of his time in an academy, even though he's stronger than most of the captains. I really don't understand much.