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hooves20dCommentedCh 216 CHAPTER 213- hooves28dReplied to hooves
wow the apple thing aged poorly... but that being said I still believe the lightbulb thing is false...
"By the way, make your rune carving a little shallower. This little mage had to change one every semester." - hooves1mthCommented
honestly my main complaint is the update time lol. so far really good and you have left yourself a lot of openings for future power growth
(Ok, people are getting bored, and I can feel it, it's time for some action! I am changing the story, remember, this is a fanfiction so why should it follow the story? I am making things more logical and making it make sense, giving the people a boost in brain power.) - hooves1mthReplied to Lc_The_Second
they do appear from what I remember it is just a backseat to the antagonist of this main character. I don't remember much or how far i got but I left when it was a few chapters and pretty much the entirety of supernatural was forgotten or no longer mentioned. it's basically a separate story contained in that world with it's own issues. i didn't like the oc love interest all that much or the created antagonist so the separate concept rubbed me the wrong way. but it's good for those that want to read a story with the same supernatural elements but if you wanted the supernatural story like many do when reading a fanfic i would guess like me one might be disappointed.
- hooves1mthReplied to SixthSense1029
its not really feeling like training as everyone is not fighting at max and easily winning. not to mention we have literally never seen the mc do anything fighting wise to warrant him not training himself as well. it makes this story so difficult to read when one really cool aspect is just ignored for 90% of the story. all fights are easy and extremely short with no show of how cool or unique the mc truly is. I could understand this if the mc was already solidified in power and has had the option to show it off to us but you have basically most of the beginning of the story at least relegating him to side character. Even just 2 fights where he struggles and shows off all his power separated to show growth would make the rest of the first 70 chapters great because it would set a baseline for the character. it's the same with training with scathach where it's a time skip and never see him actually fight even if it would end in failure but it is the perfect place to showcase his power. it's a great story but it just feels like a plug and play because he almost never uses his powers. even if it was just showing off every so often by showing us him training with senbonsakura to make things with the petals or better control them would just make it feel more unique and a better balance of action and slice of life. if it's a fear of writing action scenes I could understand but I would suggest just writing them and maybe get some suggestions from other readers.
"Scatter, [Senbonzakura]!" - hooves1mthReplied to Rsnarie
the no hesitation understanding of what it is from you is legendary
"Don't look at me like that, I'm not a sis-con." Zeoticus said while puffing his chest in pride. "I'm a doting father." - hooves1mthCommented
once again the mc of the story continues to take the back seat while his power has been so not used it is currently collecting cobwebs
"This just keeps getting better and better." Said Dante with a smile. - hooves1mthCommented
to be clear it seems like this should allow him to fight more then everyone else in the group... why is this so nerfed?
"Scatter, [Senbonzakura]!" - hooves1mthCommented
the highest avg height of a 14 year old is 5' 6" anywhere from 5-5'6" is normal for 14 year olds
James has grown as well, though not as much as Setanta. Two and a half years ago, at the age of eleven, James was 4'11" (approx. 1.5 m) tall. But now, at fourteen years old, James has grown to 5'4" (approx. 1.63 m) tall. On top of his growth in height, James was without his long-braided hair. He found out early that keeping long hair when training with Scathach is dangerous and something she will take advantage of. Instead, he is currently sporting a buzz cut. - hooves1mthReplied to j_minard
no
James has grown as well, though not as much as Setanta. Two and a half years ago, at the age of eleven, James was 4'11" (approx. 1.5 m) tall. But now, at fourteen years old, James has grown to 5'4" (approx. 1.63 m) tall. On top of his growth in height, James was without his long-braided hair. He found out early that keeping long hair when training with Scathach is dangerous and something she will take advantage of. Instead, he is currently sporting a buzz cut. - hooves1mthCommented
... why is the unique power he has taking not even the back seat but like the trunk/boot of the story... it could not be further back without just not existing...
Scathach imparted two ways to mobilize his spiritual power. The first is an intimidation technique. Using spiritual power to put pressure on an opponent's soul. If the difference in power is great enough, taking an enemy's life without moving is possible. The second technique would be considered an auxiliary technique. When focusing spiritual power into the eyes, soul sight is made possible, with limits of course. With this, James would be able to differentiate [Sacred Gear] holders from normal humans. He would be unable to identify the [Sacred Gear] however. This ability was how and why Scathach pushed James so hard leading up to the [Boosted Gear's] awakening. - hooves1mthReplied to Blake_Busby
that is nightmare fuel
James trained like that until he turned thirteen. Then he got his second break. Which proceeded much like the first one. The exception being Rias finally stopped avoiding him. She stopped antagonizing Mizore as well. Although James was sure there was a story behind that. One that no one was willing to tell him about. James also apologized for losing his cool that day. However, Rias did not apologize for her actions, which led James to believe that something like that would happen again. - hooves2mthCommented
patently false
"You know, it's been years," Jiryoku began, "from the moment I was born until now, no one has been able to injure me in a one-on-one battle. Of course, there's the fact that I've never fought anyone stronger than me, but even so, you should be proud that you've managed to injure me for the first time in my life in a one-on-one battle." - hooves2mthReplied to Beatupdreamer34
to be fair it is a complete separate anime so some of the durability may come from the different styles
Strength: Elite Jonin (Kage Low level) - hooves2mthReplied to Yamette_Kutasai
true but i would argue his silent acknowledgement of Danzo and Danzos continued existence would suggest Hiruzen is not a good guy regardless of whether the massacre was endorsed by him.
Finally, after 30 minutes, Hiruzen and Danzo arrived with members of the Anbu. When they saw the corpses of Uchiha clan members throughout the Uchiha clan compound, both felt a sense of satisfaction deep within their hearts. For Danzo, an evil family had been removed from Konoha, and he could now harness their power to unify the world. As for Hiruzen Sarutobi, a potential rebellion had been eliminated from the village. - hooves2mthReplied to C_Kohn123
realistically if you think about it it would take way more than double the power to double the gravity. The act of doubling and what that means would have to be drawn to question.
Within a thirty-meter radius of Jiryoku, the air crackled with an intense gravitational force, causing the ninjas from Root to instantly feel the weight of six times the normal gravity. Sensing their impending doom, they braced themselves as Jiryoku unleashed his technique, the Storm Slash. Despite their valiant efforts to defend themselves, the Root members found themselves powerless against Jarou's onslaught. - hooves2mthReplied to hooves
reading not learning
Even though the Root ninjas were taken aback and had to dodge the explosion caused by the explosive tag, they were elite ninjas who quickly surrounded Jiryoku. Simultaneously evading attacks, they launched a barrage of ninjutsu in his direction, including 'Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu,' 'Fire Style: Phoenix Flower Jutsu,' and 'Wind Style: Great Breakthrough.' Through his keen Observation Haki, Jiryoku, perceived these incoming ninjutsu and tapped his sword upon the ground. As he did, the earth began to rise, forming a protective barrier that shielded him within. Additionally, he increased the gravity around the barrier, further fortifying its defenses. - hooves2mthReplied to joh9wick
brother you have clearly not been learning the story. he has combined training changing is chakra as well as he gained control of the gravity fruit from one piece when he reached 10% of the template.
Even though the Root ninjas were taken aback and had to dodge the explosion caused by the explosive tag, they were elite ninjas who quickly surrounded Jiryoku. Simultaneously evading attacks, they launched a barrage of ninjutsu in his direction, including 'Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu,' 'Fire Style: Phoenix Flower Jutsu,' and 'Wind Style: Great Breakthrough.' Through his keen Observation Haki, Jiryoku, perceived these incoming ninjutsu and tapped his sword upon the ground. As he did, the earth began to rise, forming a protective barrier that shielded him within. Additionally, he increased the gravity around the barrier, further fortifying its defenses. - hooves2mthReplied to TeraBaapHuMai
brother the only problem is that lower gravity doesn't necessarily increase speed. i don't fully understand the full of holes theory. But, iIhave read a lot of stories that seem to believe the decreased gravity would increase speed so it's not even that severe. you should stick to reading nonfiction stories if this bugs you so much
Unbeknownst to the Root members, every detail of their actions was meticulously observed by Jiryoku, 'Gravity Manipulation': Jiryoku manipulated the gravity around the members of Root and increased it by 5 times, making them almost immobile. He also decreased the weight of his own body by reducing gravity around him by 5 times. At a fast speed, he attacked the members of Root. The velocity of his strikes was astonishing, enhanced by the amplified gravity that reduced the movements of Root ninjas to a lethargic crawl. This advantageous circumstance further facilitated Jiryoku's lethal endeavors, fueled by his utilization of the formidable Storm Chakra mode. With unfathomable speed, he systematically eliminated each Root member present in the vicinity, leaving naught but a trail of swift demise in his wake.