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I want to start with saying that I've been a fan of your wyvern fic and want to know when you will continue it. It was one of the best Dxd fic for me. As for this fic, the start was good but it went downhill after the bael heir plot at least for me. The harem is too big and for me it didn't work out too many OCs and the harem members character were a bit off though the romance part was not bad but not good either. But the main thing that I didn't like was the power concept of MC. Despite having power of gravity from demon lord Wilbert from testement sister new devil which is equal or stronger than power of destruction it was nearly invisible throughout the fic apart from the start where he used it to train. Soul magic, necromancy , mage, knight alchemist blacksmith etc. you have put a lot of eggs in one basket and instead of harmony it all looks chaotic . Summary: For the author, you have a lot of ambitions you should have taken one step at time for all those professions and even that harem to work out not just take the shortcut called timeskip overall the concept of the fic was good but the execution was poor.
Why just why go steal someone else's work?? Go read this read at genesis translations and support the translators there who are working hard
Go read this at genesis translations and support the translators there and this novel is not finished and was on hiatus and I think two days ago he was back.
For some reason, this seems familiar. I think I've read it in fanfiction.net and that was dropped a long time ago. But I forgot the name of the author. Anyway I can basically state that Riser will lose the rating match and will have conflict with his parents and will exchange the mutation bishop piece for Clarissa from his mother. If this story is from fanfiction.net
The plot is intriguing despite being clique. And the is the system inspired from Fated Villain novel? I think the protagonist name was Gu Changge or something. If it is I hope the author can continue this
I didn't read all the chapters but this story kind of gives me Author's POV vibes........................................................Can anyone confirm???
Writing: Not bad but needs improvement. Update: No comment. I mean every HP fanfics start with at a dozen chapters but very few maintain their momentum while the rest are dropped. Storyline: MC's too OP and no proper explanation for MC'S Powers. Character: Typical OP MCish behavior. Nothing that stands from other dropped fanfics. I mean nothing is perfect. Fanfics are like what we would have done if we're in HP kind of thing. As humans are not perfect the author should mix failures in success. I mean like how can a normal human can control magic and fight better than most adults at age of 5/10 year old albeit the human is a transmigration without hard work and years of experience even if he is creative is beyond my imagination. Long story short if you need to have a OP MC then write in the perspective of a normal human from Earth. Not everyone are genius you know. Background: No comment. Story is still young.
Same here. Hope Author doesn't take the harem/threesome route. It is nice with just one love interest. Also hope Author introduce other magical sides other than magical Britain. In some of fanfics I read, either some didn't bother to check the world outside Britain like it is the center of the world or some of the good fanfics didn't finish it. So I have great expectations of this novel. Also I love the ingenuity of the author about how he influences the characters and how he explains the magic without usual willpower empower magic thing.
My vote will be Daphne. She has good plot armour and also MC is treating her sister. As for Ivy Potter, Personally I don't think she would be good love interest with what happened between her and MC. I think she would be acquaintance with MC. As for Fleur, she is definitely a good love interest for any other fanfictions. In fact, in most of them she just magically fall in love with MC because of her veela lineage. I mean like in the world is wrong with her character. So I hope she is only a possible love interest if the author can't explain the chemistry without involving her Veela lineage. As for Astoria and Luna, I think they will better fit as little sisters with how the author introduced them and their character development. In short, I prefer Daphne as the main love interest. Thank you
Soooo, I think its a good book to read. For starters, translations and update schedule is great in my opinion. Hope author do so in the future too. And I guess background of MC is fine too but well I've been a fan of cross-overs so.......................................Im in a dilemma. But overall, its good book so far.(As of chapter 15).