The first chapter is pretty short but a conflict was established pretty quickly which is good and all but We need a clear reasoning as To why this is happening. The way thE book is written is top quality in my oPinion and has tons of potential.

This novel has potential, The author clearly knows where hes going With this novel and hopefully he continues in this direction. although it is early in the story i recommend you GIve us a brief description as to what the characters look like