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ur_mom6342yrCommentedAs soon as you said big sis I dropped this book
Jason: haha I win big sis Esdeath- ur_mom6342yrCommented
idk why i put behind in that sentence
I call him over and ask him to bring me to The Wayne Manor. "Sure thing Kiddo." the middle-aged man said quite hesitant due to my appearance. He drove behind out of the city and into a sort of more countryside area in which where a huge mansion was sitting. I got out of the car and said to him "I'm so sorry but currently I dont have the money, if there is anything I could do to make up for it." "No, no it's completely fine, it's on me." He said, giving me a wink. "Thank you so much." after saying that we both parted ways. - ur_mom6342yrCommented
its a little forced
Leone: Well welcome to Night Raid, Sinbad! - ur_mom6342yrCommented
arent these trained assassains? they wouldnt be suprised by a technique since they see new ones everyday
Lubbock immediately pulled his arms inwards and all the wires converged to Sinbad's position in hopes of ripping him apart. But what shocked them was that the wires hit nothing. They were confused until they heard a voice behind them. - ur_mom6342yrCommented
uh....
Sinbad found Tatsumi talking to Leone and knew this was the point where she seduces him into treating her to a meal. Sinbad thought 'She's too shameless this woman. I will make her submit to me like a good kitten so she doesn't seduce and trick my fellow brothers.' while he made this oath to himself he saw that they were walking to a pub near the area. - ur_mom6342yrCommented
lower this to 7 aint no way that a girl would like a 10 when the average depth is 5
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ik but still
Allan pointed at her and said: "It's very simple, really, you will be my woman." - ur_mom6342yrCommented
Why limit his abilities like this.
Well that's great, but also it's boring that I could have anything, how about a self-imposed rule. I will only buy something once a month. I guess using the gacha once a week is fine, since it could give me anything, so I kinda expect to get lots of ordinary things. - ur_mom6343yrCommented
I stg please dont have luna as main love intrest in my opion she is suuuper annoying
Cross rubbed his nose and blushed as well, listening to what he just said, how embarrassing. He stood up and said "Uhh We have to wake up early tomorrow. So.." Luna agreed and said "Follow me." she brought him upstairs and stopped in a room as she said "This is my room.." - ur_mom6343yrReplied to Night310798
morningstar just sounds extremely long and doesnt really ¨match¨ with Lucifer
"Nice to meet you Morningstar-san my name is Shizuka Marikawa and i'm one of your neighbours!" Says Shizuka with a smile that seems brighter than the sun. - ur_mom6343yrCommented
danganronpa reference?
"But let me tell you something. Every professional referee would keep the play going until the ball is either on the ground too long without possession or the shot is missed." Then Haruo made a pistol with his hand and aimed at Ryosuke. "And with a bang, you are out just because you lost to despair. If everyone would stop playing just because 90 minutes were over, football would be boring. Especially if you are right in the penalty zone." - ur_mom6343yrCommented
im begging you to change his name
"Nice to meet you Morningstar-san my name is Shizuka Marikawa and i'm one of your neighbours!" Says Shizuka with a smile that seems brighter than the sun. - ur_mom6343yrCommented
this is completely different from how she acts in the anime
Mito was blushing even more as her heartbeats increased. She looked at him and said: "You… What are you talking about? Don't you know that I'm a lot older than you?" - ur_mom6343yrCommented
idk about this one
Allan pointed at her and said: "It's very simple, really, you will be my woman." - ur_mom6343yrReplied to godslayer16
yeah but still i want to have some sort of format
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WOAH THERE
Gon felt as if Allan wanted to eat him out. - ur_mom6343yrCommented
i hate when authors only describe the mcs hair with just one word like, is the hair like bakugos or something different kinda spiky
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he got this just from showering
Ding! Congrats! You've Receive A Skill! SwordMaster! (SR) - ur_mom6343yrCommented
dont put asked since he is mad and use more descriptive words ex. furiously remarked
getting annoyed at Haruta, Katsutami asked in anger