its interesting story. buts going very slow and little unreal. how can someone be so innocent. sometimes I get the feeling that she is mentally slow.

a new character. that makes it more interesting. cant wait to read more.

I agree that we should not trust people.

really interesting but chapters are very small and very expensive.

Nice start of the story. I hope rest of story is as interesting as the start

such small chapters . they need to be little longer

I totally agree

very interesting story . I want to finish it. hiw can someone be so innocent. out of this world . let's see how this story takes turn