I need to read how bad this gets

The story has potential, but you really need to find an editer.

Just shows what a determined will can achieve.

This book is awesome! I read halfway through the first chapter and was hooked. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Please give us more!!!!!

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Than you

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I am hooked

I have enjoyed the creation and growth of a main character that falls in line with a form of Traumatic Brain injury