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Tora_Dexter

Tora_Dexter

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I love reading and writing Romance. It is my favorite genre. I'm new to writing but I love it

2020-11-01 JoinedGlobal
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  • Tora_Dexter
    Tora_Dexter2yr
    Replied to Jay_Pursie

    Oh my god!! You're so generous! Thank you for leaving another one. Love you❤❤

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    Learning to Love you [BL Omegaverse]
    LGBT+ · Tora_Dexter
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    Tora_Dexter2yr
    Replied to Jay_Pursie

    Thankyou for leaving a review 💕💕💕. About the grammar issues, I haven't edited some of the chapters. I hope it didn't ruin your experience. 😊😊

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    Learning to Love you [BL Omegaverse]
    LGBT+ · Tora_Dexter
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    Tora_Dexter2yr
    Replied to MiraiRim

    Thank you very much for encouraging me. I'm grateful ❤❤❤

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    Learning to Love you [BL Omegaverse]
    LGBT+ · Tora_Dexter
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    Tora_Dexter3yr
    Replied to SincerleySecret

    Thanks a lot for your support, this made my day!!

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    Learning to Love you [BL Omegaverse]
    LGBT+ · Tora_Dexter
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  • Tora_Dexter
    Tora_Dexter3yr
    Commented

    I like how every omega has fallen out of love with their husbands at this point

    "I plan to take away from her everything that is important to her, so she'll know how it feels when the person and things that you really care for just suddenly got taken away from you."
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    The destined encounter
    LGBT+ · Encantadia
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  • Tora_Dexter
    Tora_Dexter3yr
    Posted

    I liked the writing style and build-ups in your story. However, I just felt very betrayed as the story progressed. It is like you give us hope that people can change and then you suddenly change your mind. I understand that plot twists make the story interesting but they just constantly keep on the edge of seat and in the end I just get disappointed. For e.g. with Jayden you never really gave us an explanation of why he was bad at first and then nice and then turned into the bad guy again. I really thought you could have made him a better character. Because I had really high hopes of him, based on how you built his character. Then I just stopped reading I felt like it was so emotionally exhausting. Maybe, if this was your intention you could have condensed the story and reduced that amount of twists.

    altalt
    Hidden Omega
    LGBT+ · K_B_Bloom
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