TRGrene

It is grammar, not grammer.

Contradictory paragraphs and inconsistent writing style. Additionally, a major character is suddenly a reincarnation of Wanda Maximoff. The idea is good, the execution is horrible.

Valerians are a species of flower.

and horror mustn't forget the horror

Tempur-Pedic was founded in 1992

Spider-Man Unlimited

This is not an original story plagiarised from someone else. Goto Fanfiction.net and search the Wandering Ursa for the original story and its sequel.

Horrible Grammar, Flat one-dimensional characters, with no actual plot that doesn't seem to be superficial. The author seems to be writing a smut book but appears to have not added any smut either, all and all not worth the read.

Luna uses Puppy Dog Eyes It's Ineffective