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I've been considering it! However, I feel as if I would be limiting myself in what I can write about the romance in the story. Maybe I will cut it down to three members. Idk yet
Thanks for the review! Writing this is a learning curve for me, and you can see my inexperience especially in the first few chapters. I recognise that there are many faults in my writing, and you'll see a lot of inconsistencies throughout my writing at the moment. I will eventually take time to rewrite chapters that I'm not happy with, I hope you come back to this fanfic again and have a different opinion :) I appreciate the feedback ☺️
was a typo, cheers 👍
Gonna at least finish this ark before starting a new story. Ngl the way I have this story planned its probs gonna be quite a long fanfic so I'll need things to keep me motivated.
Yeah this is my way of killing off Vivi
But yeah, good point. May aswell not edit it though BC it'll delete your comment, it might educate some people
Ngl it didn't even cross my mind, but the undercompartment is separate from the main part of the fridge. Sorry If i wasn't specific enough 😂
Not planning on doing making any of them mistresses
Pretty sure that I already confirmed that Alice is part of the harem
After the Italy tournament
I personally don't like the whole "I can't satisfy him myself so I'll let him have other women" stuff. I know that it's hard to fit the excuse of a harem in but it kind of annoys me that the women have that attitude.
She also resembles Amber Heard
Anime version
The Shokugeki ark will start after the competition
Yeah but I feel like adding to her character a little more. Food will be the main aspect of the novel.
She also resembles Amber Heard
Anime version