This is a nice story it flows well It brings you into the world and what the people are feeling I can tell there been a lot of effort put into this story I love it And would recommend it to anyone who loves these types of romance novels

I don't know my story pretty dark but im not making a new story ether i mean i have side story of this story and a lot of them but yeah hmm i don't now I can't really do a side story at the moment because if i do I'm really need to focus on one story at time and its story is large

I feel the story is really good I know I haven't gotten that far, yet but it already got me hooked at chapter one, loving how he thought just because he reads a lot of books and kid shows he could be old enough to understand whatever was thrown at him. But then became shocked to find out that little girl was not what he thought she was. giggles sorry for maybe spoiling some parts.

I'm going, being honest; it hard for me to read stories nowadays since I'm working on my own. So I tend not to get hyped up about the book; however, I like the dialog in this story. I won't go into much because I hate spoiling, but I like the flow,of the plot and I hope it gets more chapters soon.

Awe thank you Yeah the frag container is pretty important,

I can see this being very well-liked, good action, good Overly huge numbers that make no lick of sense, and prove how willing this MC wants to show that they will become something in the future. I like it, And I bet many others will too I recommend this if you like. These type of hero stories

thank you for reading the next chapter I'm working on fixing it's error and it's taking longer that I thought it would, I hope to have a new chapter out by next week and hopefully more chapters ready by then sorry for late updates

Join in on this fantastic tale, filled with twists and turns as you dive into a messed-up world. Follow Zaily on her adventures, learning and realizing that things are not what they seem to be in this deformed future, Ps, Don't expect a harem or true love in this story; I hate that FL seems to attach itself with romance; this world doesn't even know the meaning of what romance is.

thanks I always seem to be missing spelling errors

well that's what I get for trying to get a nother chapter in a day full of error oh well I fix it later sorry for the errors

awe thank you so much

Oh my, I was wondering why you said it was wrong yeah, I would change that into clothes, thanks for the help

Hmmm I don't know what do you think should i fix the error first that my change a lot of the story or yeah lol just leave it as it is and continue let me know soon

Okay, well, I will still be updating new chapters. Don't worry; I will fix errors as best I can slowly

I got to chapter 13 so far and well I admit I a lot of errors I need to correct so before going like I should normally doing go back to each chapter and correct it may take some time it may not but just know when I go back to correct stuff a lot of things will probably be adding sadly because that what seems to always happen when I do stuff like this I hope it will not take long but just telling you all since I know my brain will be hmm no I want to add more detail here and tell more the chapters are probably going to become longer too well I have listen to my fans and now I'm going to back to correct thank you all [img=recommend]

That first paragraph was all I need.

Dam I'm not going to lie that the same as me in real life

wow this chapter was long than I thought maybe I should have put it into 2 chapters oh well

overall it's it's interesting I can understand why he try to help the old lady but still I don't think he would have actually help her given his past experience but over all I have to put this in my collection because it seem like a funny story to get back to when I have time [img=recommend]

oh sure why ask nothing can go wrong I haven't even read the next part before typing this but you never help out someone you don't know even if they are old if you been bullied it's just a known fact come on giggles