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Jacquolynne

Jacquolynne

Lv11

big romance reader

2020-10-31 JoinedUnited States
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  • Jacquolynne
    Jacquolynne3yr
    Replied to Lilo_Sanz
    "I want you to collect the keys to your house." 
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    Young master Damien's pet
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • Jacquolynne
    Jacquolynne3yr
    Posted

    loving the story so far. as a slow burning starter it is really attention grabbing in the first chapters and sucks you into this world headfirst. don't want to stop reading!!!

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    Young master Damien's pet
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • Jacquolynne
    Jacquolynne3yr
    Commented

    parker is so immature and I can hardly stand it. I really dont like how the author flipped Winston into raping bqq in order to mate with her, covered that up, then made them all lovey dovey like he didnt just turn a 180 out of character and perform one of the most haneous and villainous acts ever!!!! how could you author!?! Winston deserved better and so did bqq! for shame!!

    Ch 576 Finally Got to Eat Fish (1)
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    Beauty and the Beasts
    Fantasy · White-Headed Dream
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  • Jacquolynne
    Jacquolynne3yr
    Replied to Sani_Dragneel

    honestly I agree. the novel is just as bad if not worse than the comic version it is being based off of.

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    Beauty and the Beasts
    · Webnovel Comics
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  • Jacquolynne
    Jacquolynne3yr
    Posted

    overall the art is on par with most anime books but nothing spectacular about it. the story itself is quite original conceptwise but the writing is immature. about what you expect really. not glamorous, no in depth characters, everyone is basic including the minimalist plottwists.

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    Beauty and the Beasts
    · Webnovel Comics
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  • Jacquolynne
    Jacquolynne3yr
    Commented

    this author needs a proofreader something fierce. soooooo many errors all over the place

    He clicked his tongue, shaking his head in the process, "I can't do that. My pet clearly has not been disciplined. If I let you this time, who knows what else you will do taking my lenience as an advantage and you know I am not kind," he tilted his head before stepping away from her, "I will make you reflect on it once we get back home. I hope you look forward to the through discipline," his smile was wide, his eyes crinkling at the ends but Penny didn't get the happy vibe from him. Rather it felt like the devil was going to suck the living soul out of her today. 
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    Young master Damien's pet
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • Jacquolynne
    Jacquolynne3yr
    Commented

    what is with the forehead frowning? seems like a very odd statement of description.

    A smile formed upon Damien's lips, "How do you think I know?" he questioned her question in return bringing a small frown on her forehead. Was it the slave establishment? No, they couldn't know, she said to herself to look back at him.
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    Young master Damien's pet
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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