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Your story explors plot points from a rational but still realistic view point. It is not overly antagonistic towarts a singel group or person, many fanfics make that mistake, but insteat critical towards all parties. Your fanfic follows the basis prinsipals of benifits!!! There are no 5 chapters of mental breakdown just because blood has been spilled, no saviours complex, the 'old world' is not described as heaven (lets be honest our world is not al flowers and sunshine), the story is not built on the illusions that a smile or two could magically stop old timers from following there plan which they have been brooding for decades and tops for no harem :):):) It juist said a lot of things I nedded to hear when I was about te give up the fandom. You got my suport.
Tho I would rather see him end up with Fleur than with Luna, I also saw a lot of amazing ideas in the 'open to ideas' bar.
Just a thought, but Pansy Parkinson. They will share an interest in fashion and jewelry.
I sincerely hope this fanfic continues. It has many different concepts which I enjoy. English isn't my first language, but I haven't noticed any grammatical errors. It has reincarnation without some kind of god, yet an unique explanation. It has female friends but no sloppy romantic plot, the girls are really capable and have enjoyable characters. He has a personal space, but the way he uses it isn't cliche, nor does he try to hide it by making up all kinds of obvious excuses. He is honest with his mother without turning it into a dramatic moment of revalation and his mother is not a damsel in distress who needs protection from the oh so arrogant reincarnator but a resonable person and the troll incedent is excellently written, dissection, genius! The spirit of the researcher shines bright. I'am look forward to the next chapter!!!
seems like you just lost a bet, i want 5 chapters as compensation.
i love it!!!
A castle in the sky, please!
Please don't buy Dobby. I find it so annoying fanfics buy Dobby will knowing he is unreliable in regards to Potter.
No increase in lifespan and make it an emotional 150 years or so. After which he moves on.
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I love it, senserly looking forward to the next chapter.