Going well. Still trying to figure in the fates

Xia showing true colors

I am happy she is turning over a new leaf

This story sounds interesting and intriguing. I am glsd the female gets determined. Trying to understand why all females are weak in ghe beginning.

Good story but interest he never did apologiz for being wrong. He should kneel on broken glasseing

And again a repeat chapt Many of us deserve to have passes given back. Happens again I leave the apper

I wasted a pass for this chapter when it was earlier. Please return my pass.

Chapters are mixed up. Need to correct.

Story is cute and able to follow. Very good story line and character development. It does have some grammatical errors but doesn’t affect the story line.

Very cute story. Wait until he finds them

I love this book. The kids are the miniature parents and i enjoy their antics

Love the story

Nice story

It is good so far

Ok story

It is ok. Still pr ogressing

There are missing words at the end of paragraphs. There are grammatical errrors. Please look it over again. It is starting to interfere in the story line.